Ruko the thief, now that's hilarious, love it
*sobs ungracefully at the cutness*
Lyra (Chapter 7) - Fri 23 Dec 2011
EEEEE I just had to read it all again, because it's just SO GOOD! Dramatic, funny, and slightly naughty - a great fic overall! Numbah One! Numbah One! :D :D
lol Nice ending but awkawards... ermh confession scene. lol I can only imagine Sess's team... because he's trying to keep her awake xD. I think it was a nice ending. And look! This chap was long sib! Congrats!
I must have read this chapter five times by now. I want more!!! I just love it!
~Sandreline
*^_^* Love it! Ooohhhh, I can't wait for more!!!
~Sandreline
Diane (Chapter 7) - Fri 23 Dec 2011
Like it & am sorry to see it end, you do have some errors but they had me laughing, especially the matter of faculty error.
It's a nice chapter but it seems a little out of place, I don't think that the sword was mentioned at all until this chapter and there was no instance of there being a squatter outside of Kagome's shop or any example of her being nice to him before the attempted robbery. Kagome almost being swept off her feet by kohaku seemed to come out of nowhere as well
I am rather fond of the fact that sesshomaru is acting like its a forgone conclusion that kagome is his mate, very sesshomaru and awesome that kagome asked him out for coffee
fun fic, a little disjointed but enjoyable, thank you for writing it
:( Poor Kagome. I absolutely love to see Sango paired with someone else. That seems like a fruitful pair :)
Diane (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 Dec 2011
Really enjoying this. Umm, just as an FYI, there is no s on anyway. Have no idea why people are using anyways but it's just anyway no s. Brow would be better as bridge here; She sighed and pinched the brow of her nose.
Lyra (Chapter 6) - Wed 21 Dec 2011
Another great chapter....but where is S'homaruuuuuu?! Poor Kagome, wasting away in her horniness! And Sango - twenty NINTH pup? AHAHAHA! Your Kouga is awesome; I can't remember the last time I saw him paired with Sango, but this is just hilarious, cause they're all..."I love YOU more!" "No, I love YOU more!" And then poor Kagome is all ".........waaaah!" Write more, write more!
::awaits the last chapter beyond the boundaries of eagerness::
Awwww. Kagome is STILL as comical as ever... and horny to boot. XD But Sesshoumaru is letting his absence make her heart grow fonder, isn't he? Eheheh?? NEXT CHAPTER! I want Kagome's happy ending! =) This is such a cute story. lol. And Kouga with Sango.... interesting.... lol.
Is it his way of sulking I wonder or working up the nerve to speak to her again?
Great chapter! Now that I think about it, Sango and Kouga do suit one another quite well :)
~~Hahaha!!! XD Ahhhhh that was too great! ^^
Lyra (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Dec 2011
I love this chapter! The list of years is so great - "You did last year, and in 1936, and in 1842, and in 1789 and 1790..." AND in the seventeenth century, AND in the sixteenth century...ahahaha Inuyasha is such a fail. But then, he FIXES it! :D :D :D Woooohooooo! And it seems like Kagome is already starting to come out of her anti-Sesshomaru denial.
You must write more, Numbah One, more! go go go! [cheerleading]
LORDstickuphisass! I LOLed! Just hilarious. And thanks for going ahead a clearing up the misunderstanding between Kagome and Sesshomaru. I am loving, loving, loving this story!
LORDStickUpHisAss? ohoho, that tickles me silly! absolutely priceless!
Fish Wishes (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Dec 2011
oh, sweet jesus! You did it again!!! xD
so funny and knee slapping great!!!
EndlessDevotionx (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Dec 2011
HAHAH. I love the whole misunderstanding, I find it funny(x
Can't wait for the next update.
Oooooh this is even better than I've imagined! I want more more more! Pretty please?
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