Man that was a good chapter!!! I hope Kagome does not drop the ball again!!! He sounded serious about that!!!

To think!!!! Miroku and INUYASHA!!!!! I almost died!!!

Of course that lecherous Monk would like it there... He can get all of the play that he wanted!!!

Amazing!!!

You have really outdone yourseld with this story!!! I love it and I can't wait for more!!!

HELL I CANT WAIT FOR ALL OF YOUR STORIES TO BE UPDATED!!! I'LL BE KEEPING AN EYE OUT FOR IT!!!

WAITING IN AGONY!!!

~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I DIDN'T THINK IT COULD BE PULLED OFF BUT YOU DID A WONDERFUL JOB...

I WILL ADMIT RELUCTENTLY THAT I READ THIS STORY AND WHEN I GOT TO THE THIRD CHAPTER (I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW I HAD GOTTEN THAT FAR UNTIL I LOOKED...) I STOPPED READING, THINKING TO MYSELF 'IT'S JUST NOT MY CUP OF TEA', BUT THEN I THOUGHT ABOUT IT AND CAME BACK TO IT...

I FORCED MYSELF TO GET THROUGH THE SCENE...

(YOU KNOW HOW SOME STORIES START OFF BAD BUT THEN IS AMAZINGLY GOOD AFTER???) WELL, YOURS STARTED OFF GOOD, THEN IT HIT THAT OPINT FOR ME, THEN I FORCED MYSELF TO GET THROUGH IT THINKING THAT IT HADS TO BE AMAZING... I JUST HAD TO READ FURTHER...

WELL I WAS RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOUR STORY IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I JUST HAD TO ADJUST TO THE SCENE OF THE STORY AND THE MOOD ALSO... YOU GOTTA THINK ABOUT IT... I READ YOUR OTHER TWO STORIES FORST AND THEN THIS ONE...

I HAD TO ADJUST TO THE SWITCH LOL...

WELL, I HOPE YOU ENJOYED THIS REVIEW!!! I DIDN'T INTEND TO WRITE THIS MUCH, BUT I FELT I NEEDED TO!!!

MOVING ON >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess

I KNOW THERE'S ANOTHER CHCAPTER AND I HOPE SESSHOMARU STOPS HIM FROM DOING WHAT HE WANTS TO TO...

AMAZINGLY VIVID AND AWESOMELY WRITTEN...

MOVING ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess

I'M JUST JUMPING IN MY SEAT WAITING FOR THE DAY WHEN SHE GETS THE BOTH OF THEM BACK FOR WHAT THEY ARE DOING... NO ONE WILL BREAK THAT SPIRIT TOO EASILY!!!

~_~^-^~_~ - Ditto Princess

^_^ Loving the smut so far, you're really great.

Don't apologize for your writing, ever! It's not your problem that people scour every single sentence then have the nerve to tell you how you've offended them. All they had to do was click the back button and erase you from thier personal existence, not bog down your creativeness with thier unhelpful (and therefore meaningless) criticims. You should only have helpful thoughts that help you grow or pedastals of loving reviews to be placed on as your reward for sharing your work. 

My advice? Always do a quick read once you've posted your chapter. It's amazing the little blemishes you spot only AFTER the whole world can see them lol.

Other than that, loving this! Do your thing!

I'll be back!

-SSS 

i reeally really like this story! i like how you added inu & miroku in the mix, i cant wait to see what other positions they do next

How many new positions? I wonder....

Great story, more updates soon I hope...

*Applesauce! I mean...applause!!!*

I love this story so far. I do hope there was some foreshaddowing going on earlier and that there will perhaps be a scene later on which includes Sess, Kagome, and Aimaru that includes a bit of the two males involved with each other as well as their "pet".

More please! This smut hog demands it!

I would recommend reading forbidden pleasure by lora leigh (bound series). I think you might get a lot of inspiration from it. Actually any of her books from the bound series are really good. Surrender To Fire by her has a bondage twist.

I'm obsess with this story, so i love it everytime u update. I kinda like the pet's world. Who knew miroku and inuyasha like it both ways. I'm excited to see the next chapter.

I'm not sure I feel bad or happy about this chapter, but I take as it is and go on, lol. I enjoyed Inu puppy, but I still expecting Kikyo to walk onto the screen, honestly, I think it may would have been better if she had, that way Kagome would have female priestess to make her more comfortable about her life. Miroku can try, but it's his nature to perverse even in this context. So yeah, just some food for thought.

OOOOOO!! I really love this series!!! Please continue to add more exciting chapters and I will do my best to continue my obssesion with this!! ^_^

I love everything about this. You are amazing. Can't wait to see more!

Oh my its so hot in here.... is any one else hot? so very warm, its sweltering 

....but its such wonderful torture.

very nice Duchess, quite dark you are indeed. 

I admit it, because of the first note in this, I checked your reviews to see if someone had called you sick. After reading through them, I'd like to give an honest review of your story, with a bit of explanation.

I am honestly involved in a s/m relationship with my mate, and we do venture into places that make even fellow body modders cringe. My mother is also into the bdsm lifestyle, and the topic of rape play, rape fantasies has come up, and it's some that we both discuss fairly frankly, especially since they seem to be becoming more and more prevelant. There's no way that we condone rape. BUT, there are plenty of people into rape play, simulated noncon, search and capture, forced submission etc. It's about fantasy. I've read tons of smut novels that have similar themes to this, and I've written some. I understand other people's concerns, but I think ultimately you're constructing fantasy, and in fantasy, there aren't (or shouldn't be) limits, in my humble opinion. That being said, you've suceeded at constructing a 'dark' fantasy, and you've done it very well. I've enjoyed reading this, and I can't wait to see another update. Kudos to you. Now I'm going to go molest my mate.

I've enjoyed some of your previous works for their lemon contents that dips into the dark side so it was with curiosity that I ventured into this fic.

One of your A/N states in part: rape (from a modest hearted person's point of view).

I would like to address this first, as rape is defined as:

rape

¹    [reyp]  Show IPA noun, verb, raped, rap·ing.

Rape is rape, modest person or not. If one could ask Kagome if she'd been raped by Aimaru and Sesshouaru, she would say "yes." Because according to your definition, Kagome is a modest heart and so therefore, she has been raped. So yes, it is good that you put it in your first A/N, but at the same time, it feels that the definition of rape in your other A/Ns is smudged and fudged with. 

From the first chapter to the most current (chapter 6), I feel that numbers 1, 2 & 4 of the definition above have been displayed according to how Kagome's reactions and thoughts have been written out. (#3 is a definition that changes depending upon the municipality.) She has been sold against her will, held against her will, sold again against her will, pressured into performing oral sex with threats, unlawfully compelled into other sexual acts against her will even if her body complies. Even if there is physical pleasure, even if the violator(s) involved are beautiful, even if they don't physically harm her, I find that it feels like rape the way it is currently written because there is almost no sign of consent in Kagome's mind nor is she totally aware of everything that they would do to her. Yes, she's an innocent and many things will be new to her, but to give open consent, one should have the ability to say no and have that no be abided by. Otherwise, it's rape. And I am not a modest-hearted reader, just a reader that understands that rape is something forced upon another person. No ifs, ands and buts. Reluctance is one thing, but this is another. Perhaps if you would consider adding more from Kagome's perspective that allows her to see glimpses of her inner submissive earlier, or taking away some of Aimaru's and Sesshoumaru's forcing of her just for their own pleasure with no accounting of her state of mind/general well being.

If there is rape, I find that there is no true D/s relationship, which leads me to:

Another A/N conveys: But I only want to tell a story about a realistic situation where one learns to become a true submissive slave. Some want to be, some are, but what about those who on the inside, are a true submissive that need coaxing out of their modest shells into the dark light of S&M by their true masters? Again I say pleaure feels best when you are reluctant. ne?

I find the above a bit misleading for me as I feel that getting into a true D/s relationship requires above all, mutual consent and trust between the parties. The first and most important rule in B&D-S/M is that all things we do with each other must be safe, sane, and consensual. Kagome has not been given the freedom to choose this lifestyle as it is written, nor has anything been explained to her other than she's a pet and needs to do whatever they say because they are her Masters. I'm not sure how safe, sane and consensual is involved when Kagome is not in the state of mind able to be such. A D/s relationship only flourishes under trust, allowing the Dominant to take control so that the submissive can give themselves up over to them in safety. As this is written right now, I find it hard to believe that anything but rape will continue and Stockholm syndrome to arise. Also, in any true D/s relationship, all parties involved are allowed to choose to be in the relationship. Not all Dominants and not all submissives click with one another. Again, there seems to be a lack of mention of any connection from Kagome's side of the story - which is where there seems to be a huge disconnect for those of us who views this as being rape. Sex can just be sex, but you're writing about a Kagome who is an innocent in mind and body that have undergone betrayal from her loved ones. Sex is not just sex for her because that is not where she would be at when this story takes place.

You also mentioned that a true submissive needs coaxing to come out of their modest shell, but I could not find any phrasing in the chapters that speaks of coaxing, just forcing. Forcing her to heed them, forcing her body to feel things she has not been eased into, forcing her to pleasure them because she is given no alternative (other than returning to Naraku perhaps, but what option is that as he is portrayed?) Coaxing allows for willful participation from the person on the receiving end; this does not seem to be conveyed. For me, it would be helpful to believe if there were more connections from the beginning that allows Kagome to trust and be open to receiving the D/s structure.

My last impression is that Aimaru and the other OC is being used like a crutch in the way that they speak more and interact more with Kagome while Sesshoumaru is somewhat off to the sidelines. The focus is more on AimaruKagome and less on a SesshoumaruAimaruKagome, with the latter being what you're aiming for, I think. Less Aimaru, more Sesshoumaru might come off better perhaps. Even though he's not as wordy, Sesshoumaru can be strongly conveyed through thought and actions.

I'm for dark kinks. I'm for D/s, M/s. However, having rape involved distorts, and I'm unsure how a lasting D/s can evolved from it without more groundwork added in to prep Kagome so that she has a consensual say in what is happening to, and not WITH, her.

*Blushing* See you next time.

I really love how you've developed the story so far. I can't wait to see what happens next. Every chapter gets hotter and hotter. one of my favorite.

-_- You may high-five Naraku.

You've corrupted me. 

Because I'll be back.

You're amazing.

-SSS