I absolutlely LOVE this story!!! Sesshoumaru is being such an ass, and I can't wait til he figures out that she isn't as weak or stupid as he thinks, and have all of his insults to her thrown back in his face! Like he falls in love with her, but being who he is, she still thinks he doesn't think much of her other and is only using her, and she starts pushing him away. That would so put his narcassitic, egotistical ass in place! (Though of course you'd have to have them work it out in the end if you want a happy ending). It would add a nice amount of angst to the story, something you already have lsightly building up with his insults and her own views of their relationship. And just like Kagome, your story is amazing and way better than you're giving it credit for. You're a fabulous writer and so have confidence in you and you story, 'cuz I certainly do! :D

i loved it lol :) cant wait for more and till then,

KAR