I think that they should stay together but only after some serious examiniation. I say this becuase I do not se Kagome leaving her son behind and the years apart would have distance her from Inuyasha. Very good story. I hope he finds the truth soon.
I found your story very creative though some parts illogical. Rin must have known what killing herself with Kagome's sword would look like to his guardian so why would she do that? Sesshoumaru blames Kagome for Rin's death and believes she killed her, but ultimately, it was him who failed to protect her. What was Rin doing in such a place and where was he, her guardian? Why would Jaken lie about what happened, especially after Kagome helped set him free? He might hate humans, but both conveniently forget that Rin was human. Then there's Kagome's unwillingness to tell Sesshoumaru what really happened. I find it nonsensical that she refuses to explain the circumstances of his ward's death, even if it's out of a sense of guilt, or whatever. If he belives her or not, that is another matter, but she would have already given him the facts. Now Sesshoumaru has too many things to repent for that a life-time wouldn't be enough: He's destroyed an innocent girl's life who risked her life trying to save his ward. He deprived a child, his own child, from his mother's love because of his bias way of thinking. He sent innocent humans to fight in his war, hence, sentencing them to death. And to top the list of wrongdoings, he dishonored his half-brother by taking InuYasha's fiancee for his own, violating, impregnating, and then keeping her hostage. Of course he has to find out the truth!
There's also the matter of your many grammatical mistakes. You seem to have problems with past and future terms. Other than that, it has been quite fun reading your fiction. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Kayelyn (Chapter 10) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
YAY! So excited for the update! Squee!
hmmm...I don't think she should get back with Inu. By the time that Sesshomaru and Inu find out the truth, there will have just been too much that has happened to really ever go back. Besides, do you see Kagome leaving her son behind? Or Sesshomaru willing to let Inuyasha around him? Also, Sess's honor will demand that he make it up to her... so that needs to be taken into account. If she doesn't end up with Sess, I could see her being alone or perhaps with an OC but not Inu.
Can't wait for more!
Till next time, lovely
Midnight (Chapter 10) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
| I think that they should stay together toward the end
tify (Chapter 10) - Thu 22 Mar 2012
can they share kagome to be thier mate?
| I am glad that Yoshiaki got to meet Inuyasha and find out who his mother is. I am glad that his heart is like Kagome's... big and caring and brave. I hope he gets to meet her real soon. I look forward to Sesshou finding out the truth of Rin's death. Who will be given the honor to enlighten him? I think Rin's spirit should be the one to do it. You could have Rin lingering around because she needed to know that Sesshou and Jaken would be fine after her death. But they were not, so she couldn't pass into the afterlife. She could tell them in the Forbidden Garden. She could let them know that she's disappointed in them because of how they've been treating Kagome. (Rin has been watching over them since she died and only recently found a way to take on corporeal form). Kagome could try to stop Rin because she still thinks it's her fault that Rin died.
That's the way I picture the encounter to happen.
Keep up the good work and update soon. This is a pretty good story and I want to read more. :P
Lonelylulaby (Chapter 9) - Tue 28 Feb 2012
| Golly gee, this story is one I look forward to. Thanks for the update. Sesshoumaru never finding out sounds interesting. Parents don't want to know their child killed themselves they would rather go out and look for the murderer. I just feel bad for kagome, she's the scapegoat. I also wanna know what's going on with her other friends. Why didn't inuyasha come for her?
Ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
| This fic has been very interesting and has kept me on the edge of my seat... I keep wondering what is going to happen next. I feel very attached to Kagome and the other occupants of the forbidden garden. I am amazed with how you are able to put all their pain and suffering into words that flow like a rushing river.
I would to see what happens when Sesshou finds out the truth about how Rin really died. Would his anger toward Kagome change any? Will he understand that his anger was unjustified and misplaced? Since Kagome was the only one that did what she could to help Rin, what would she have to gain with her death? Would Sesshou try to make it up to Kagome for making her life a living hell? Also, what of Inuyasha and the others? What has happened to them over the last decade?
Keep up the good work and update soon. :P
Venita (Chapter 9) - Sun 26 Feb 2012
Sesshomaru needs to find the truth behind Rin's death and Kagome and her son need to meet, please update soon.
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This Story Is So Incredible! :)
I think you should make a chapter where sesshomaru finds out the truth of rin's death eventually. However, I think something completely tragic should happen involving Kagome and Sesshomaru Feelings/relationship with each other to bring it about. On another note, I'd find it interesting if you'd make an ending of kagome and sesshomaru hinting at resolving their issues with each other, now whether they do or not is entirely up to you.
Please Update Soon :)
wildchild (Chapter 9) - Sun 26 Feb 2012
nooooo! he needs to find out!! that would be terrible if he didn't :(
she needs to meet her son, too! i don't understand why sess keeps saying how worthless kag is though. she gave him a strong son.
Anonymous (Chapter 9) - Sat 25 Feb 2012
no way he needs to suffer! he should find out what really happend and be remorseful, but not enough to let her go. instead he should try to make it up to her but she never forgives him.
Venita (Chapter 8) - Fri 03 Feb 2012
Great chapter, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 7) - Wed 11 Jan 2012
Sesshomaru is so cruel I can't he did that to Kagome, please update soon.
Andrea (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 Jan 2012
Oh gosh that was so good! Poor Rin!
Venita (Chapter 6) - Wed 04 Jan 2012
Great chapter, please update soon. HAPP NEW YEAR!
Venita (Chapter 5) - Sun 18 Dec 2011
Great chapter, please update soon.
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