I agree with Kagome!  I am eagerly awaiting the next day and I am excited, too!

She was very quick to invite him. DId she do her research or something?

WEG - 'she tried to contain herself ass...'  ROTFLMAO indeed!  ^.^

Can't blame her for laughing though...

LOL this is actually pretty cute. hehe please continue. 

ROFLMAO!!!!

Very cute!

Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see the direction you take on this story.

ha that's kinda hilarious! But for the two or three sentences you used figure twice. This is probably a little too nit picky but when I read it, the repeated words kind of took away from the quality of the sentences. Try switching them up and they'll flow better and make them stand out

This is gonna be good. :)

its pretty good so far, not much i can comment on though. and i did see some spelling errors, but keep it up i really want to read more.

Sounds very intriguing so far! I'll look forward to the next chapter :D