I laughed my butt off when I read this. I love your idea for this story. I can't wait to find out just what kind of war he's planning on waging.
Great job! I look forward to the next chapter.
Oh, this is so cute! Hehehe Sesshy's so pissed! Oh, men and they're sex. :P So is this "war" going to entail seducing the beautiful Kami into, or maybe drive Sessh crazy by having it so his member only reacts to her? Oh, I'm sorry, my mind is in workshop mode! Anyways, love your story so far, can't wait for more!
toon town (Chapter 2) - Tue 06 Mar 2012
This chapter is awesome!
No mistakes that I can see.
The chapters flows beautifuly and is VERY funny to read.
I enjoy your writing style and phrasing of story telling.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
No really, CHAPTER NOW!
Cute! Update soon!!
Tz (Chapter 1) - Sun 20 Nov 2011
I love it! Please continue :) great plot.
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