Great story, please update soon.
There were some minor spelling errors/word mix ups sprinkled through the story (rood/rude; breathe/breath, etc), but it was a very interesting read. For the most part, they all seem to mirror their canon-selves, except for Sesshoumaru, but his demeanor fits for the story. I'll be watching for the next update.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Cool, the games begin. Kouga comes off too desperate, if he lightened up just a little he'd catch someone that's not half crazy.
I like your story so far. I look forward to reading more.
I'm a little confused with who Inuyasha wants to be with. He hit on Kikyo which annoyed Kagome, but he wants Kagome but he's sorta-kinda flirting with Kikyo, but Kagome doesn't mind because Kikyo and Inuyasha look compatiable...right? @_@ I read his convo with Sesshomaru three times and I was still like...eh, I'll just go with it.
Love Koga though, he's chuckle-worthy.
Happily anticipating more!
-SSS
Hehe, wonder what's gonna happen next? Kouga needs to quit it with Kagome, but i'll take him, lol. Loved the last two chapters, very funny both of them.
I like this cute little story. And I think you have captured Kagomes personality well with her forgiveness of Inuyasha and her wish for him and Kikiyo to get together. And in a way you also portray Inuyasha correctly since he probably wants both girls although this time he had Kagome first. Sesshoumaru's way too nice but I like him that way.
Aviator (Chapter 4) - Tue 22 Nov 2011
Hell ya! For the first time EVER my iPhone is allowing me to write a review! Love your story it's sooper great! Can't wait till you update again! Awesome job.
Anonymous (Chapter 3) - Sun 20 Nov 2011
Interesting, so far. I will be waiting for more. ^^
I'm diggin it so far, keep goning!
-SSS
Nathalie Shiffer (Chapter 1) - Sat 19 Nov 2011
yeah! i love your stories an this is a pretty good chapter, i want to read more!!!!! pleaseeeeeeeee update soon i want to know what happen when sesshoumaru meets kagome
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