im reading this story for the 2nd time and i like how to the point it was. a lemon scene would have been nice, but i dont think you're the king of person comfortable with writing them so i forgive you (ha,ha). this was a great story and i hope you keep up with your writing. keep it fun and you will never be bored with writing. looking forward to more from you. c'ya'
This review is just a nite to self to not read this again. I think this is my third time lol. And I always keep reading thinking its a different story. Too bad the site doesn't have a place we could put past stories besides our favorites. Cause evwn if its cute and I like it it's not a favorite mind blowing tale. When I put a storu in my my favorites I tend to reread them and feel pleased with the outcome even if i know whats coming. This story is different, just a minor pick me up with about 3 different days of events. Good and cute but nothing too major
Nicole (Chapter 26) - Sun 06 Apr 2014
That was a wonderful story. I enjoyed reading it immensely. :)
Nicole (Chapter 8) - Sun 06 Apr 2014
"It was very fair to say he was impressed with this woman before him. Who would have thought that someone as beautiful as her could ever be so intelligent?"
Sesshomaru totally deserves a Gibbs slap for that one...
WOOOOOOO I loved this!!!!!! I mean hell you could have taken it even farther hahaha I would not have minded!!!! Ahhhh this has made my day.. I'm soo happy now ^.^
I'm shaking this story was soo good!
T.T I did want more..and to find out who knocked off nara-spider, but this is ok too. I enjoyed it while it lasted and can't wait to see more from you.
Venita (Chapter 26) - Tue 20 Dec 2011
That was quick a year have pass and Kagome and Sesshomaru have a pup, great ending. Merry Christams and a Happy New Year!
lol cute :3
Awwww! So sweet!
Venita (Chapter 25) - Sat 17 Dec 2011
I'm glad Kagome and Sesshomaru are finally together, please update soon.
Venita (Chapter 24) - Sat 17 Dec 2011
I wonder who was Naraku first Naraku? Please update soon.
The answers yes!!!! Yes, yes, yes!
Hm, that doesn't sound like it will end well. Actually it sounds like a trap with a puppet pretending he's dead. Love it so far! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon!!!
Yeah, Fluffy saved Kags! Take that Spider boy... I love the ending to that chapter. Perfection!
Andrea (Chapter 24) - Wed 14 Dec 2011
Ooooh the plot thickens! That sucks though that now he's not a threat to her anymore :( It makes things more exciting
| Oooo! So suspensful!! :) I can't wait for more.
raindancer13 (Chapter 23) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
| Lol Sessy can be so slick sometimes. :) Update soon please.
Venita (Chapter 23) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
Kagome is moving in with Sesshomaru, please update soon.
Angela (Chapter 23) - Fri 09 Dec 2011
This is amazing, can't wait for the next update. :D
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