Glad to see you're back. Enjoyed the re-write very much. It explains much more than the original. Can't wait for the next update.

That was a good chapter. Can't wait for the next update. I wonder how her meeting with Sesshoumaru will go.

Ok, you've definitely caught my attention....hope to see an update soon! :)

Love it so far!  Looking forward to more, it definitely seems like this will be a great adventure story.  Just try not to make us wait too long for an update please :) (and for a Sesshy appearance)

Also, I think your writing is excellent.  Everything is clear and I like how descriptive it is, because it makes it easier to connect with what is going on.

This is a good story. I am so sorry that you have fear of someone stealing your story but as far as it goes with this comminity, talk to the moderators. They can give you more answers to your question. 

Wow that was an amazing first chapter! The detail in this first chapter made me feel like i was there! Good job! I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter!

Nice exciting beginning to your tale. The fight scene flowed nicely and the chapter end leaves the reader asking for more. I will be watching for your next post.

I'm intrigued, the possibilities with this story... oooh, I'll be waiting for the next update with baited breath.  (and you sure know how to write a summary.... even if it's no one ;) )

And go girl power! It's never a good idea to underestimate your enemy, especially if she's female.

~lily