Nicely done; I like the plot line you have thus far it's rather unique. I do so hope to read chapter 3 soon <:
This is chalk full of awesome! I find the characters to be believable in the world you have created, the story line is interesting. Unlike most stories I read on here, I have absolutely no idea where this is going and I love it! I have so many questions that keep bringing me back in hopes that I’ll find the answer, like why is Sesshoumaru blind? What is Naraku really up to? Or has he truly changed?
I love the fact that you write long chapters, I like drabbles but they can be so frustrating in there slow progression. Also the fact that you have practically no typos, thus keeping the reader locked into the story, not having to go back and try and figure out what the author had really meant.
Don’t be discouraged by the lack of reviews, you’re doing a fantastic job and I can’t wait for the next chapter. This is the first review I’ve ever posted on Dokuga, and I’m doing this in the hope that you’ll keep writing! So please, PLEASE keep posting this story!! I want to know more!!!
-A new fan
Frizz-of-Fury
inu-girl162 (Chapter 2) - Thu 17 Nov 2011
This is such an interesting story!! Please keep updating, I can't wait to see how kags handles the situation, and figures out why no one remembers what happens in the past!!? and what is up with the rebels trying to kill her??? Argg mystery mystery!! :P Update SOON!!
missy (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Nov 2011
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