I am so interested in your story.  I can not wait until the next chapter.

I did enjoy this and had a laugh too! I like that blend you've got of comedy and that little teaser...

“Kagome,” he paused…,” they can run.”

great cliffhanger ending. Made me curious.

I also liked the whole fall out of bed clutz comedy as well as being interrupted on the very brink of something delicious. I thought you captured the moment very well. Nice work.

 It's Zombies isnt it!!! Like 28 days the remake zombies? :D Oh I cant wait now.