Awe that was such a sweet chapter. Love the dogs name. Yasha fits perfectly. I wonder what the pack will think of when and if they find out about yasha.
Ps this chapter makes me want another dog but I'm sure I would be in the dog house with mine if I got one. He's a spoiled little brat who is an attention whore and with another dog....he would shun us lol :)
First off, I LOVE this fanfiction, it always makes my day to see that it's been updated. I know you're going off of backlog, but for when you start doing new chapters (unless you already are) then I figured you'd like to know that yesterday was "Come out of the Closet Day" Annnd I'm not sure if that could fit in anywhere in your story, but just thought you should know! Keep up the great work, I'm loving these daily updates!!!
LittleRin (Chapter 67) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
I'm loving these updates. :) And the doggy. So cute! I'm doing my best not to overthink things because I have a bad habit of guessing/ruining endings and I don't want to.
Pricila (Chapter 67) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
I know we are supposed to be patient readers but I want to get to Sessh and Kag! Is that horrible? On another note, please don't tell me that some how this dog is one of the Inu brothers if not the elder of the two. Could be why we haven't seen Sessh in awhile in the story. But thats jumping the gun and I need to try my hardes to be a good reader and be patient . . . so what happens?
Pokkoro (Chapter 67) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
ARRRRRRGGGGHHHH IT'S DRAGGING ON TOOOOO LONG!!! Q ______Q
I AM TURNING INTO AN OLD LADY WITH ALL THESE FRAZZLED NERVES!!!
Thank you for updating!! <3
You're breaking my heart. T3T
His question was almost met with a petulant one of her own, one that would be unfair, especially given the context of his visit. What was she going to ask him! Oh man... that's going to kill me...
Still mortal? Is she planning on not being mortal someday? Or is she emphasizing that the pack forgets that she is? So far the pack is being pretty judgmental. I think they also forget she didn't live through the last 450 years with them. She's what? 23? That's barely an adult. I remember 23. I'd hate to think my whole life was decided by the dumb stuff I did at 23. I'd still like to see them help her instead of blaming her.
Hurray! She passed. From what I've heard about the difficulty of the driver's test in Japan, it's not unusual to fail many, many times.
Oh god... Houka... little kids... no tact... oh that was painful...
So the thing with the cabinets, these are the ones in the Tokyo apartment that are being replaced? I went back and checked skyscraper day because I'm still a little confused about which apartment she and Eri emptied. The bit about the keys makes me think it was Sesshoumaru's and not Inuyasha'. If it was Sesshoumaru's it means that he would have noticed she'd been in there by scent, not by the missing items. I'm supposing that her fresh scent in the apartment probably didn't do him any favors, and like her scent, the cabinets probably remind him too much of her. But then I'm thinking like a girl and I'm probably way off the mark.
I still think there's something off with this Toorima thing. I don't know what it is yet, but something about Kagome's assumptions feels wrong, like there's something she's missing or she's only seeing what she wants to see. I don't know... I think I'm going to have to wait this one out to see where you're taking it.
If I speak in the tongues of men or of angels, but do not have love, I am only a resounding gong or a clanging cymbal. If I have the gift of prophecy and can fathom all mysteries and all knowledge, and if I have a faith that can move mountains, but do not have love, I am nothing. My parents just renewed their vows for their twentieth anniversary on Wednesday... I'm guessing the day you posted this. I didn't know old people could be so cute. I'm such a victim to sweet and cute lately. Anyway, I'm kind of sappy right now because the pastor's words are still in my head so the end of the chapter really resonated for me. That and the bit with him bringing her the groceries was adorable. At least now we know for sure he knows where she lives.
And you've done it again... I wonder when she's going to remember about Sapporo and then the next time I read... there it is... Hmm... maybe... nope, don't want to jinx it....
I think I commented on Kagome being in denial many, many chapters ago and that it felt very out of character... or if I didn't, I meant to at some point. So it's good to see you're working that in here now, that she's finally acknowledging it, it makes Kagome feel more like Kagome. I don't think the running thing is really out of character for her though. She would run home quite a lot in the manga when she was hurt or angry, just not quite for so long, but she always comes back. Let's just hope she doesn't run out of time, yes?
Wow... Souta... never saw that coming.
Interesting to see who takes initiative first amongst the pack. I can understand leaving Sesshoumaru the way she did, but am pretty disappointed in her for how she left things with everyone else >_<. Glad Shippou came to talk to her.
Chili (Chapter 66) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
Kami, Kagome! don't linger any longer T.T I want you back with the pack already... the fact that you're not keeps me from sleeping at night, constantly checking for more updates, pining, longing for that chapter when you finally do, with a fervor I do not have for anything else...
I better see some real serious fluff at the end, for enduring all this torture! >.<
Zyren (Chapter 66) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
Hatter you know I love you but you're killing me Smalls! I don't think I've ever felt so heartbroken for two fictional characters, I hurt for them my heart aches for them! I hope this gets happy again, and she can't avoid him forever considering he is in Sapporo right now. I wouldn't mind seeing a visit from Sesshoumaru's mother, obviously he's been acting different...oh! Idea time! I know Sesshoumaru is too responsible for this but I feel like he also believes he doesnt have to answer to other people or explain his actions. What if he just disappears for a bit? His mother an impending mate would probably think Kagome would know something and she would feel too guilty and worried to denythem help in finding him. So they would have to finally have a confrontation. Butthat's just a thought, I'm sure whatever you come up with will be ten times better!
Happy Writing!
Love, Zyren
You are killing me here. I mean you said a few chapters ago that you were almost to the end... and still more angst... I can't take much more of this. What is Sesshomaru going through? and when is the pack going to tell her that she destroyed their alpha...? Bad Kagome... always thinking of herself and what she needs. (not really but I am feeling not nicely towards her right now.)
Alii (Chapter 66) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
Why oh why? Please update soon and please let them come together soon like really soon! (':
-Alii *at the verge of tears*
Loveyaa (Chapter 66) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
Well it's al finally hit her. Wonder what she will do about it. It seems like the pack is willing to take her back though. wonder if she will try and fix her mistakes or stay where she is starting her life over...again. I can't wait to see what happens and how she gets her happy ending :)
Pokkoro (Chapter 66) - Fri 12 Oct 2012
...it feels as though sesshoumaru is plotting something... As though he'll be here before we know it...as though he'll be the one who forgives kagome first and breaks out of this ANGSTY ROUTINE! But judging by the way you write, i think it will be kagome who initiates the reunion (as much as i don't like that, i'm more of a tradition person, courtly love and all, male conventions)...
I HOPE THE REUNION WILL BE FILLED WITH KISSES AND HUGS AND MORE KISSES AS WELL!!!
... We need like 10 LONG chapters of pure kagome and sesshoumaru reunion, smut kinda of thing... After all this ^^v
Thank you for updating (as always!) <3
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