This is a great ending! This story honestly could've been lengthened if you wanted it to be. There was certainly room for that, up to the writers discretion. However, that said, I think you did an AMAZING job bringing this story to life within 17 chapters. I mean, WOW! You really managed to capture the story, your characters, relationships, etc. I'm actually quite impressed! As fanfic lovers, we often come across stories that take too long. But you've done the opposite here without losing the story! I don't know if this is making any sense, just know I'm complimenting you on your awesome ability to tell a story without wasting words. I love it. I'm always enthralled with your stories! I'm so glad I've found your works! :)
Carlyn (Chapter 15) - Sun 12 Jul 2020
Well it's about f'ing time Sesshomaru, hypocritical ass. Lol
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