Please update, I really like the plot of this story. And I really want to read more
This I pretty interesting and I hope you come back and update. Seems to me to be a great start and yes you did an exalent job and saying who was who.
ja ne till next time and keep up the good work
Selena (Chapter 1) - Sat 16 Mar 2013
Please update this! I love this kinds of story. And I think this would turn out really great! So, please, give me more!
I really want you to update. This story had me at the summary and I really liked the first chapter. I keep hoping that I will get an emial with an update. So I hope you do soon, this story has great potential and I can tell it will bw a good one.
When will you be updating? I feel like I have been waiting forever and I really want to know what happens next. The concept is interesting and I like the timeline that you showed in the first chapter. I understand it will take awhile to get to them actually being together but it will give you time to develop the plot and character. I hope you update soon.
StillInterested (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Feb 2012
Randomly I thought about this story today... went back through the pages (bc i couldnt remember the name just the premise)... and had to find it because that's how much I was really looking forward to reading this. I hope that this will go further than the prologue because it's so incredibly different/unique from any ideas on this site that I cannot wait for it to be written. Please please continue.
I really like the time line that you used to explain how everything occurs. Its almost like a news reel from past headlines. I'm looking forward to seeing how the relationship and plot build over time. Please update soon.
Seriously? You're leaving at that?! Meanie! Hurry and update!
Thats rly interesting! :) Please update soon (like, today? XD)
Wow, this is just the prologue, and I am already sucked into the story. Good job. I really like the idea of the plot. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Love it. So imaginative.
Not to mention that I can see all of those things logically occuring. Scientists and their experiments. lol
Please continue.
-E.C.
Aw, the poor dog hybrid. I feel bad for it (him-Inuyasha). I hope you do something with that one. I'm interested to see where this goes as far as the dog cross-breed (Sesshomaru) and Kagome go. Looking forward to the next chapter.
This would be much easier to read if this was split into paragraphs. I can't tell whether I like it or not because I can't read walls of text.
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