Naraku! A good guy? well my mind feels well and truly fucked. Im so confused about everyone's personalities. I usually hate stories where inuyasha is portrayed as evil when he's not, but this is so well written that i cant stop. really, its brilliant.
thats not the sesshy i remember. and whats with inu's dad being all evil? wasnt he all' do you have something to protect?"
still, this is beutifully written and actually believable, i am so gonna read more of this
(Chapter 21) - Sun 16 Jun 2013
I just read this. It is Anachornistic, crosses cultures arbitrarily, ignores many rules and is ABSOLUTELY FANTASTIC. Don't know how you did it. LOVE readig your stuff.
This it's the second time I've read through your work and I have to say the awe that your story inspires absolutely DOES NOT diminish in a rereading!!! I'm still just as astounded as I was the very first time I read this!! It was absolutely breathtaking!!!!!
|I just read all 21 chapters of this in one sitting. On a Sunday night/Monday morning knowing I need to be up by 6:50am. It is now 5:01am. This story was beautifully written, incredibly creative, and refreshingly original. Excluding the typos and errors here and there, and the paragraph-block-format that made my eyes hurt. Favorited. :)
This was completly fantastic! I loved every minute of reading it, I'm a little sad it's over but now I'll just go check out your other stories!
(Chapter 21) - Wed 28 Nov 2012
I have been waiting for the ending to this story for what felt like forever. i am sad to see it end but at the same time have enjoyed it lots. A tale of triumph and all it took to tget there is always rewarding. I can't wait to see what other great adventures you come up with :)
I have been on this site for a very long time and somehow I missed this masterpiece!!! Simply phenominal. It was so good!! Ugh!! I mean, amazing work!!
(Chapter 1) - Sun 23 Sep 2012
Can I just say, that I truly loved your fanfic. It was beautifully written, the storyline flowed well and it was a very capitvating one at that. One of my favorites. Yes, yes, one of the best. Was sad to see it end, but alas all stories must. Great job!!! Looking forward to more of your work ^^
(Chapter 1) - Fri 21 Sep 2012
I thoroughly enjoyed this story and thought you did an excellent job on it. I generally don't go for this type of fantasy writing when it comes to Kagome and Sesshoumaru and disagree with labelling the story as canon, but I liked this, though at times the fantasy bits (i.e. the types and amount of magic, creatures, etc.) were still a little much. A few things really bugged me though, particularly having them know French as nobody in 1500s Japan would have known it. It was a good story and as an author you are free to do as you wish, those are just my personal peeves.
I liked the story over all, there were a few things which I didn't get clearly but assumed well enough. Mostly the bit about Inuyasha and Kagome's wish. It was barely touched on but at the same time played such a large role to the story.
I do have a small bit of criticism. You used a bit of French in there. The first French-Japanese interaction wasn't until the early 1600's. Even after the first meeting it would be another four years after that before anyone of French descent spent any time in Japan.
And the coffee. It didn't become prevalent until the late 1800's and was only a minor curosity in the early 1800's. Before the 1800's it was all but unknown. Thought it's first introduction was in the 1600's.
Just a bit of information I looked up because it was bothering me slightly. Still a great story though.
(Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Sep 2012
Why would Sesshoumaru tell her to be quiet and then threaten to yell himself?
That. Was. AWESOME! I've had a wonderful time following your story to completion. Congratulations on finishing!
Thanks so much for writing.
I must say that this is such a marvelous story! I greatly enjoyed reading every bit of it :)
sequel sequel sequel!
(Chapter 21) - Sat 15 Sep 2012
I love it!!! And I know what you should do next. An epilogue, like a 1 year anniversary of the battle showing how everything's been since. ^_^
This was just awesoe. be proud my friend be proud.
The story was amazing and the ending was wonderful.
Such an excellent story. Great finish!
That was utterly spectacular. I loved this story from beginning to end. It was rather sad to see it finish up though. I hope you continue writing. You are quite talented. Thank you for adding to the stories I can read over and over.
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