Nice and creepy. A good read. Well done.

Fantastic!

Again another home run I like the elements you used in this. Very addicting.

For you saying you dont write scary stories very much....you so should. this entire story was trippy from begining to end and it was unpredictable, which was a major plus..altho i feel like i wont sleep tonight XD

I'm with u. I hate scary stories!  And I really should've heeded your warning, this one have me the chills!  

Loving the story. IM sad to see it has ended but it was most deffinatly worth the read. 

Thank god i didn't read the update at night otherwise i wuuld be dead i m so shakenn my fingers are literally shaking .. the story was awesome i was rrallyreally terrified  you did a terrific job  although i dnt wanna read a ghostly storyyy again XD 

Okay' I've got goosebumps now. Ghost and horror tales are not normally my thing, but I like your other stories so gave it a try. Totally creeped me out, but beautifully written.

Super super creepy, and extremely well written! What a wonderful way to start off summer ghost stories. Thank you Chie!

good story.  in latin ghoust stories we had the same elements, water, the hour and the well.  you ever wonder if all this stories are connected.  good job  it was squary and misterious.  this kind of story develops in really old plaes thats still ha e the same vives.

I really enjoyed reading this.  The ending tied things up nicely - especially as I was wondering about Sesshomaru and how he really fit here.  Good old Grandpa!

Daaamnnn it gives me chiilllll... Dx 

Good story, good in the creepy way. 

Got my hair stand on the end o(???)o

a very interesting story.  you have cought my attention.   keep thestory alive.  happy to read more....

You have litterally terrified me to tears. I am not joking.

Well written story, but I think you may understand why I can't continue reading on. I want to know what will happen next but the fact that I may have nightmares keeps me in check.

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. 

Chieee!

Is this going to be a happy ending story? I would hate it if it's not because the story is a bit scary. Living alone by yourself in what you would call a haunted house - I named it so because of the nightmares - is scary. Who is this person that haunts her by the way? I can only guess that it was her father, but that would be so mean of him to haunt his own daughter. So, maybe it's not him. -shrug-

Update soon!

_S. Hasegawa

Being haunted by Souta? Or is there another presence?