I really liked this; I appreciate the care you went in to, describing their past and history and interweaving it. Which song was it? xD
Shadowstarprinces Pridestar (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Jan 2012
still no chapter
Yabou (Chapter 1) - Wed 19 Oct 2011
I like the ending you gave this story, but then again, I'm a big fan of open-ended stories.
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