I really liked this; I appreciate the care you went in to, describing their past and history and interweaving it. Which song was it? xD 
      
Shadowstarprinces Pridestar (Chapter 2) - Wed 25 Jan 2012 
still no chapter 
      
Yabou (Chapter 1) -  Wed 19 Oct 2011 
I like the ending you gave this story, but then again, I'm a big fan of open-ended stories. 
  
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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