| interessting.... please continue!!
black moon inu (Chapter 1) - Wed 16 Jul 2008
| oh man I love it and i hate you. You couldn't stop it somewhere else could you, oh like the end of the story. no sircously it's really good and i'm really impatiant so post soon. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE!!!!!! lol see you soon. hugs and puppies
Kate (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jul 2008
| It's a good plot but the writing is hard to follow. I like it and would read more but please make it a little easier to read. Love it!
Aurora (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jul 2008
| Like your story, but its hard to read at some points. Please update.
Lady Care (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jul 2008
| Wow I love your story soo far keep up all the great work!! lol Your story is very in depth i love how it is going so far. Please update soon!!!
inuforever (Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jul 2008
| The story is sooo easy to read but please watch your spelling!!
(Chapter 1) - Tue 15 Jul 2008
| i love the story so far please update sooooooooooneeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
| ooo, excellent, can't wait for the actuall hunting *^_^*
| oi what have those two started!?
yey! I can understand this chappie this time! ThAnK yOu!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| um....I don't think you copied everything....[The only resemblance was his hair, eyes, and possible youkai abilities. He had ears sticksuch. She smiled and went to her bed. She pulled it away from the wall and on the floor was a sheet.
She pulled it and there was a hole in the ground.]huh?
I mean is the first chapter just a big summary with bits and pieces of the story? or is it the story itself...if that's the case it's very confusing with all the scene changes.>.
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