So... you've got my attention. You write really well and so far this plot seems very interesting. I really like it. I'll be awaiting the next update.
-E.C.
MY ABSOLUTELY FAVORITE PART:
He nodded. “It’s because I--”
“Hold this.” She shoved her drink in his hands, which he took and somehow managed to make it look manly, and began hitting him with her brown leather purse. “You little...I can’t believe it! Because of you? I don’t even know why it’s your fault, but you’re the boss! I’m so angry right now I--”
“Could hit a Yakuza boss with a purse?” he interrupted mildly, easily grabbing her purse mid-swing with his free hand.
“Yes!” Kagome stood there fuming, and snatched back her drink, taking a long sip.
I laughed SO hard when I read that! LOL. I absolutely LOVED it. XD
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