First  of  i want to say  i really  enjoy your story -  Now that is said  and done  i would like to point out to you  may have  a few  grammer  mistake's  but  that  can easily be  corrected   , please dont get too discourage with this review  i  mean you  no  ill will ,  i just want to help you  to  make this  fanfictions  the  best  story  that   the rabit Sesshomau X Kagome  fanfic reader as my self  out  there who would be  fully entertain .

I highly recommend  that you find your self  an  Beta readers ,  As an  fanfics author  myself  ,  i  tend  to make tons a  mistake  but  i  get  it correct thanks to  reivewers out there who would  would point  your mistake  and  try there best to help you anyway they can  .

Sure it will take  alot  of  time  and hard work but in the end it is  well worth  -  I want you to  be 100%  satisfied with your work .

The Rewards  are  great when you get a very good reivews  . 

So once again  please  dont  get  discourage  and  don't give up  ,  i  am  looking forward to your  next chapter .

Aloha no ,

Hawaiian_Gurl