Zooooooooommmmmmggggg! Excellent! All except the cliffhanger!!! You MissKatt are a meany face! I just stayed up all night for this story and yet, here you go leaving a cliffhanger! Anyway, I absolutely adore your style of writing, your detail and your choice of plot have made this story a pleasure to read. Its been a fun way to spend......5 hours.
Quick questions:
When Kagome becomes over run with Sesshomaru's youkai, why doesn't her hair change as well? If she develops fangs, claws and markings, shouldn't something happen to her hair?
What happened to Rin!?!?!?! Ahhh!
Is Sesshomaru going to save Kagome from the marriage? Or, is she gonna go all ape and make her way back on her own? (Personally I'd love to see Sesshy's face when Ji-chan has to explain he didn't even ask what had happened in the past, and thus what happened to Kagome)
Anyway, this is officially the longest review I've written, like ever. Oh! And by the way, *Throws a flaming alligator sword at you* For the cliff hanger!
Great work!
Cuddles
MISS! :'( Such carnage :'(
Mamma! Why did Mamma die?!??! Noooo!
:smacks you softly: Update... and make it better ! :'( My poor, weak heart :'(
Ero (Chapter 23) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
Longer. Chapter. Thanks :) Its like i get a taste of something and then the chapter ends and i need to wait weeks to find out what happens to only get another taste :p
ArisaChan (Chapter 23) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
Again another wonderful chapter!!!!
ArisaChan (Chapter 22) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
I hope Kagome escapes and saves her brother. Hope all is well with Sesshomaru too!!! Ahhh can't wait for the next chapter!
Venita (Chapter 23) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
Poor Sesshoumaru, Happy New Year!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Stupid Eastern neko! Fix this ASAP!!!! Bring Kagome back from the Modern Era already!!!! I hope she rips Akito a new one, the jerk. And Inuyasha needs a serious beat down. Death is too good for him. Poor Inukimi. I really liked her character. Next chapter please.
Lillian (Chapter 23) - Fri 30 Dec 2011
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
*pugs ears* la la la la la did not jut read that la la la la la no I didn't. *shakes head fervently* The whole lot of them are idiots! Pure idiots! Made of stupid stuff! Where are their brains? Kagome and Sesshomaru need to get a talking to. Don't make me do it. I won't be nice. *breaks down and sobs*
I know I did a review on this chapter on the 23rd but I've realized something else since then. Her grandfather has all kinds of antique artifacts he hoards away. Surely there are items that would be worth something to a museum or a collector. He's selfish in not wanting to sacrifice any of his personal posessions, but expects Kagome to sacrifice even more. She's already sacrificed the life of a normal teen by doing her duty in the past and risking her life at times. This is very selfish of her grandfather. She needs to wake up and realize all this. Even if she can't get through the well to do what I had previously suggested, why doesn't she think of his collection and hit the storehouses searching through all his stuff. She should not have even left the shrine.
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