please keep updating please

Sorry bout the spelling exploit. You had all ready gotten a ? on that one. I do believe you've got quite the crazy idea's down I like your story and hope you get inspired more. It's quite refreshing

lol I know what you mean about reviews. Sometimes though if it's that good of a story I'm stuck reading till its finished then I end up reviewing. A tad late but hey -shrugs- Oh about a word I was wondering of. In this chapter and I believe two others. For example "She earned for him in every way a girl could earn for the one that..." did you wish to write "Yearned and Yearn" instead of "earned and earn" no?

When will the smut come??? I want to see some Kagome/Sesshomaru action.....

oh wow, i dont have many questions, just want more, though are kikyo and kagome on thesame leve? i kidna hope hat kagome is the daughter of the female goddess, so she IS at the same leve.

I dunno why, but I keep imagining her in the next chapter panicking and thnking she isn't ready after all. (It kinda screams KAGOME at me). But, rationally, I think they probably won't get that far.... probably

Will there be a nice little lime for us in the next chap? 

Can't wait ^^

~lily

This story is interseting but, for this chapter at least, I would like to point out that I think you mean 'yearn' not 'earn' when describing some of the feelings between the two. Thanks for writing.

this chapter was simply.... HOT!!!!! lol i loved every second of it, it has been faved by me since day one and i cant wait to see what happens next, so till then,

KAR

puppy- MINE! nos hare! loves!

~~ XD Ohhhh I loved it!!! Finally some affection! ;D  I'm loving this fic more and more; each chapter just keeps getting better! ^____^ So keep it up!

I love love love your story. sorry, i am one of those who does read and walk away but im also a little bit of a nazi for spelling and i thought i would let you know that when your writing earned as in hes yearning for her.....its spelled yearn. like i am yearning for another chapter to this fabulous story. just thought i'd let ya know. ;)

Luuuuffed it! It wasn't Gajeel tho -_-', guess that guess went out the window. And, yaaaaay, they're getting closer. XDDDDD

Your mistakes aren't that bad, easily overlooked, though there was one that took a few seconds to decipher: '' She earned for him in every way a girl could earn for the one that had made himself present in every fantasy'' ... I think you meant yearn there.

Nice job. =)

~lily

is it sesshomaru? it has to be, it must be, but if it isnt?..... he's gonna be so jealous when he finds out.... and he wont understand why lol!!!!! cant wait for the next chappie :D till then,

KAR

Hmmm, I think it's Gajeel. (I gotta ask tho, Is this Gajeel like the one in Fairy Tail???) I loved the chapter.... and a threesome of gods, or is it godly threesome? ;PPP I wonder when'll things get to 'heat up' (in more ways than the one). 

Nice job, can't wait for the next installment =)

~lily

Please update soon, I'm always so excited to see updates to this story and yet so sad that they're not more frequent. 

omg update soon

so yeah.... i REALLY hope that kikyo ends up on the mainland as a whore.  o.o one that's beaten and stuff on a daily.

yup i absolutely love it, keep up the good work and im gonna check out your other stories while i wait on another chapter for this one... till then,

KAR. :)

Hi! Just read Chapter 3 and in your AN you said you were feeling unsure about this story -- well I'm enjoying it. It's a new setting, a different take on things and while it's a Sess/Kag pairing, it's wide open as to how where you take the story line. Please keep on with this story, I'd like to see it finished. There is one thing I hope you will do -- please "spell check"! There were quite a few sentences that didn't make an sense until I reread them several times and finally figured out what word you probably meant.

Looking forward to more chapters!

Of course there is amusement in trying to picture a jungle-gym Sessh, especially being accosted by little girls!!!!! =DDDDDD It's a good chapter, shows the 'intentions' of our protagonists, and how they think about each other. And no, I don't think he would have denied her should have asked him.

And the alpha thing.... awesome. 

Hmmm, I wonder what the encounter between brothers would look like, and how would Sessh react to being left alone in a room with Kik (not that he would be alone with her for long, I have a feeling Kag would come bustin' down the doors quick should that happen).

What happened to Sango and Miroku, and the idiotic demonesses?

~lily