I'm sorry you did not like the story and I appreciate the constructive critiscm however I still like the way I have my story end. I can't bring myself to give it any other ending. Thankyou for the review even though I disagree.

This is really tasteless and makes no sense at all. He leaves her because he wants to protect her but after three years it´s O.K. to come back? After he married and had a child he just comes back and everything is all right? And how could they kiss for the first time and be already engaged? And of course Kagome wants to kill herself like an emo and Sesshoumaru saves the day and everything is sushine and happiness again.

Wow, it´s been awhile since I´ve read something so unrealistic and juvenile.