Reviews for The Spell by kirrav

donna (Chapter 1) - Fri 22 Sep 2017

I REALLY WOULD LIKE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT WILL YOU BE UPDATING YOU STORY 


Dragonscloud (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Sep 2014

I LOVE it. But you really need to tell us about the reunion between Kagome and the others


Lisa (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Nov 2012

A little proof reading goes a long way, but otherwise it was good.  You are a good writer and I look forward to exploring your work.  My first lemon was a little bare-bones too so don't worry about it.  We all have to start somewhere. :-)


ashlee (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Jun 2012

i loved it! It's the best fan-fiction i have read so far, and i want to read more! Please continue the great work.


(Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Mar 2012

I thank everyone for the review and I am glad you like it. I apologize for the grammatical errors but I have gone back and fixed the one's I have noticed. Unfortuneatly, I have no beta reader but I would appreciate it if you could inform me of anymore errors you find.

~kiki~


Sesshoumaru'sPriestess (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Jan 2012

HAHAHA!!  Kami I  wish there was more to this!!


Lumi (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Nov 2011

This sounds interesting but I can't get past the poor pacing and the grammatical errors.


Inkasha Taisho (Chapter 1) - Sun 25 Sep 2011

It seemed a little rushed, maybe should split it into a two shot, or just made it longer. I enjoyed it overall though, despite the small little errors like grammar and spelling.


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