I LOVE it. But you really need to tell us about the reunion between Kagome and the others
A little proof reading goes a long way, but otherwise it was good. You are a good writer and I look forward to exploring your work. My first lemon was a little bare-bones too so don't worry about it. We all have to start somewhere. :-)
ashlee (Chapter 1) - Wed 27 Jun 2012
i loved it! It's the best fan-fiction i have read so far, and i want to read more! Please continue the great work.
(Chapter 1) - Sun 11 Mar 2012
I thank everyone for the review and I am glad you like it. I apologize for the grammatical errors but I have gone back and fixed the one's I have noticed. Unfortuneatly, I have no beta reader but I would appreciate it if you could inform me of anymore errors you find.
~kiki~
HAHAHA!! Kami I wish there was more to this!!
Lumi (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Nov 2011
This sounds interesting but I can't get past the poor pacing and the grammatical errors.
It seemed a little rushed, maybe should split it into a two shot, or just made it longer. I enjoyed it overall though, despite the small little errors like grammar and spelling.
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