I absolutely adore this fanfic, I hope to see an update soon.
Although I've read some of your other work, today's update was my introduction to this story. I'm enjoying the thread of it and look forward to reading more. I will say that I can see in these chapters, your growth as writer since you published the prologue. You may consider a rewrite on the first few chapters one day (in your precious spare time I know ;) )
Eva (Chapter 5) - Fri 19 Jun 2015
Although I've read some of your other work, today's update was my introduction to this story. I'm enjoying the thread of it and look forward to reading more. I will say that I can see in these chapters, your growth as writer since you published the prologue. You may consider a rewrite on the first few chapters one day (in your precious spare time I know ;) )
Please oh please tell me that this will continue soon!!!
Please update soon please
ohmygod you need to update like now..
Awesome! I love how perceptive the bird lord is of everything. ^+^
but... I think Shippou was held by ropes, not robes. ;)
Now the question is... how is Sesshomaru going to react to all of this? And will we hear more on his pup-image of a perfect mate?
Thanks so much for writing!
Girl, you got me hooked by the third chapter! Hahahhaha...I cannot wait to read about Sesshomaru's reaction to Kagome's reappearance in his life. It's going to get even more interesting from here on out. :D
Venita (Chapter 4) - Sat 03 Mar 2012
I Love the story, please update soon.
0o0o0o0o0o0o s0o0o0o0o0o awesome! but DAMN THE CLIFFEE!!!!! *shakes all over and lobs bribery c0okies in your general direction*
Eryn (Chapter 3) - Mon 07 Nov 2011
Moaaaar! : D
ah no! Sango and Miroku were torn from their family with the youngest less than 3 years-old? :whimpers: Well... at least the children were well tended and hopefully remembered how happy their parents were with them and their lives. SO it was good... I think. Overall. It could have been Much worse.
Cute how you worked the other pairings. Especially Sesshomaru's little reactions to them.
So is Kagome there because of Rin's wish? :brow arch:
Heehee! Go npc miko! You tell them, and don't let them run off half-cocked and without proper preparation! ^_^ Go girl!
Thanks so much for writing!
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