OMG! Poor Kagome! I would be mortified too. Especially, if Sesshomaru was there. It was hilarious!
*Pictures everyone bandaged in maxi pads* Ye gods....
This was a really well written, cute moment, and you conveyed her 'Oh jeebus, what do I say,whatdoiSAY?'ness very well (I know it's not a word lol). I love awkward moments, in fact it's fair to say I'm shamelessly addicted to them, and I LOVE this. Thank you for writing it.
Rinku (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Nov 2011
| That was absolutely charming :) I really enjoyed it wish it had more interaction with Sess tho ;D I think you have great potential with writing (not that I'm much of a talent-judge since I'm new to writing myself XD). I hope you continue to post your fanfictions because I like your writing style :)
This was so charmingly written, with it's gentle humour and nicely detailed mortifications on Kagome's part. I thought it most amusing and that you captured the way the men would react exactly spot on! You captured that annoying male habit where they will not desist until they force an answer out of you, which you know beyond question is something they don't want to hear.
You took a ticklish subject and handled it beautifully. I smiled from start to finish. I also can imagine the scene after an intense battle too, with "unmentionable's" glued here, there and everywhere, Lol!
I think your future potential as a fanftiction writer positively shines!
Saeko (Chapter 1) - Mon 12 Sep 2011
Loved it!!
Would love a sequel where they find out what it's really for, and then Kags would really have to explain it. xD
:--Saeko
lol! >D
That was a good lie. I would be just as horrified if I found a kid with one on their head.. Lol Well I guess it not so much a lie...did you hear about the story the kid who cracked his head. They used a pad on it to stop the bleeding while they went to the emergency room. lol Guess whatever works. :P
TKE (Chapter 1) - Thu 08 Sep 2011
OMG....that was freaking hilarious!!!!
I have this image of the results from the next battle... Kagome patching everyone up with maxi pads... Inuyasha's got one covering an eye, Miroku has them restricting his kazaana (sp?), then of course Kags would have to tease Sango by threatening to bandage her up in the same way... either that or now Rin and Shippo will play doctor with them lol.
hahaha this amused me. Nice job!
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