Keep it coming.

Luna!!! :) I really liked this chapter and loved how emotional the lemon was with the conversation from earlier on mixed in. This story just gets better and better! And I know I've said it before but I love the way you write. Looking forward to the next chap.

-E.C.

Awww, I love the split-frame style of this chapter. ^.^

Keep it coming.

That was so sweetly written! I loved that you used their joining as a healing as well.

Keep it coming.

A great story.  I love that InuYasha was a loudmouth LOL, it fit perfectly*  I feel bad for kagome.  All that pain and guilt,  Yikes!  

Still loving this and really liking how the story is progressing! Wonderful work luna:)

-E.C.

losing* a daughter

Great story, please update soon.

I'm excited for tuesday to come. please update, I want to know what she smiled.

I'm excited for tuesday to come. please update, I want to know what she smiled.

I should be asleep but instead I read this XD... I do not regret it =)! I think my favorite part was the prologue but that's only because i can't say that Kagome's part was my fav seeing as that would be the whole chapter lol! But really, you do make her seem so real. I loved it luna. Update soon!

-E.C.

I love this story. Kagome in her sullen state resembling Kikiyo was genius. I'm a little confused though. What happened at her dinner with Sesshoumaru? 

Dull, perhaps, but very informative. Sometimes a lot can be said in a seemingly dull moment.

Thanks for writing.

I really like your story.  I look forward to seeing how your plot will develope.

i LOVE this!

So I really like this story. I love the complexity of Kagome's emotions and the way it gives the tone of your story depth. Some parts seem like a comedy while other parts scream tragedy. It has a very 'real life' quality about it.

Btw..The double entendre at the end of chapter three was brilliant, there was something very raw and deep about it. I loved it. Awaiting the next update.

-E.C

I like it.  The plot is vaugely similar to a few others, (Kagome getting stuck back in her time and meeting Sesshomaru,)  but I like how you are portraying Kagome.  She seems to have reached a deeper level of character in this story and you really make the reader understand how she's feeling (or rather not feeling)  I'm interested to see how she will continue to develop and what direction the two will take. Will we be hearing any more about those books Sesshomaru writes?

I think this story is great! Well written with proper spelling, grammar and puncuation. I look forward to the rest of it :)