Although this chapter had elements of sadness it also had images of great hope and possible happiness.  I really love watching sesshoumaru trying to decipher his feelings where Kagome is concerned.  One day like lightening striking he's going to realize that he's fallen in love with her!  I also really love the new familial relationships Kagome is putting together.  She has children that adore her a proud father figure and a couple of rascal type brothers as well as good friends! I love your original characters they have amazing personalities!

These updates make my day. And let me tell you it takes 2 things to make me excited about a Fanfiction: 1: Frequent updates. :) 2: A good frikin story. I love that it's not all fluff, rainbows, and smut everywhere. I don't have a problem with stories like that..;) But when I'm looking for more than just a quick sweet treat, I come looking for things I can devour and savor.....and MAN is this one good. Keep up the good work! 

D: awww... So sad and sweet

That being said, DON'T FORGET YOUR PROMISE! I HAS DOCUMENTED PROOF! MWAHAHHAHAHAH

Honestly? Just sheer perfection really.  I was waiting for the moment where Kagome could have her grieving moment.  She's been so strong throughout the chapters that it was nice to read some genuine vulnerability.  It seemed as if she was filling up her days with tasks and activities to shield herself from the pain.  Albeit, it does seem like many of her duties came upon her by happenstance.  

I've said it before and I'll say it again, I really do love your invention of the core in this story.  It does wonders for progressing Sesshomaru's and Kagome's relationship, though I wish those two would see it; all in due time I guess.  I do believe that Sessh is quite OOC, but I find the changes believable especially with your definition of pack.  He's definitely taken his role as Alpha with gusto :).  I can't wait to read more scenes with Bokusenou, he's one of my favorite characters here although that goes the same for your original characters too, haha.  On a last note, hooray for Sango's brain making a comeback!  It's not my favorite arc in the story, as I find Sango quite the stinker in this story, but I think it's important for Kagome's path to mending.  

Thank you for the update and another top notch chapter!  Happy writings and please update soon!

By giving Sesshomaru and Kagome this inner space to explore, you've created a unique way for them to interact that can go completely out of character...but it doesn't, imho. These are multi-dimensional characters and you are doing a beautiful job of showing us their growth. I've been expecting this kind of breaking point for Kagome for a while (was sort of expecting it with the Resshin wedding) but this timing with Sango's battles makes perfect sense, too. It was sad, but of course we expect the post-catharsis developments to be more and more interesting...keep up the beautiful work!

~~That was a fantastic chapter Hatter! ^___^ I loved the insight into them both, it was pleasantly revealing even if it was sad. Keep it up! Hope you update soon!

Okay, so, I just started reading yesterday. (always findmyself wandering to other stories as I wait for others to update. Before I realize it, I'm reading five at once. Storie of ourlives, eh?) anyway! I'm only on chapter 11 and once again must put the story down and sleep, but I wanted to review anyway and tell you how impressed I am with your ability to stay within the confines of the characters. Not once have these two encountered a gushy moment or even a waver. We are constantly reminded that hey, this is sesshomaru and kagome. They are two very different characters. A few times you see that sesshomaru can't wait to get her out if his hair. It's a beautiful truth that made me uneasy at first, but now I have grown to love it. I feel like you have captured these two very well, and to add your certain taste of writing skills it truly is growing into an amazing story. more reviews to come.

Thank you.

These last two chapters have ABSOLUTELY made my day! XD I havn't laughed this hard in a LONG time. Props to you and I am eagerly awaitiing the next piece. 

I love I love I love this chapter!!!!!   Muahahahahahahaaa... practically got tears from laughing so much.

Thank you for brightening my evening. <3

I love this story but please don't put Corona on hiatus! It's my favorite story of yours and it's so different from everything else on this site. Canon stories are great but I think it takes so much more to write a wonderful AU story and you've done that with Corona.

Yay!! I totally had faith in Sango! 

YAY for LOLs!

~~Awwww that chappie made me smile SO very much!!! XD I loved it!! Keep it up!! Looking forward to more!

RandoM giggles indeed :) super sweet ! Loved getting  to see them horse

Around <3 haha at Kagome learning

How to fly!!! Definitely evens up the playing field :)

OMG!! This is one of my favorite chapters!  I'm having a hard time forgiving sango and I truly hope that's she's had a true change of heart! I'm reserving judgment!  My other favorite part is when she claimed Shinzuru as a father figure that made my heart all warm. The rest of this chapter was down right funny! Had me laughing out loud! Sesshoumaru and Kagome sittin in a tree K I S S I N G!!! LOL All he needs to do now is pull her pony tail! God I so love this fic!!!!!!!!

Whew... I'm so glad that Sango had an "apostrophe" (in the immortal words of Smee!).  Totally delightful chapter and just the sort of light, yet forward-moving type of thing that I needed tonight.  Busy days ahead, so the smile I got from reading this is definitely going to come in handy!  Thank you, as always, for sharing your hard work and creativity with all of us!!

:D

~~me~~

I am sorry for your loss. *Huggles* I wish you all the best.

Thank you very much for writing another chapter of this lovely story. I really like your writing style, it flows nicely and it keeps you wanting to know what will happen next. The way you have Sess and Kag interact is really nice too, you are letting their bond grow slowly and I really like how their relationship is atm. Thanks again for writing and dont forget to relax and take some time for yourself :)

xxxx!

This chapter was awesome. sorry about your family member, my condolences to you. I will be praying for you and your family

Please accept my condolences once again.  This chapter was fabulous!  Sango makes me soooo very mad.  While I understand that she is coming from a very bad place I can't understand how she has been able to turn so fully on Kagome.  Sesshoumaru seems to be seeing Kagome in a much different light. The closer these two become the more profound their relationship will be come.  I also love that whole scene with the children! It was fun, beautiful and a truly eye opening moment.  I have to compliment you on your original characters. I love them all for many different reasons! They are a true compliment and welcome addition to the story!

I just found this fanfic a few days ago and have read straight through.

I am SO LOVING this fanfic!! It's well written, minus some misspellings here and there (not anythingh that throws me out of the fic), and I keep reeling at the twists.

That whole bit with Sango was surprising!! But when I started to think on it, yeah, I could feasibly see her doing this.

Anyway, I'll have this bookmarked and I'll pop in from time to time to see if it's been updated. :3