What a wonderful start. What a wonderful story. I wanted to review every chapter for you because this story deserves it. I hope you keep writing and I'll keep reading because you're a fantastic author. I've read so many of your stories (this and convivial are my favorites!) and have you ever considered writing something original and publishing it?
I just think its a great story with interesting and developed characters, and I admire you for being such an intelligent person to create it!
Good luck in writing and in life, and thanks for the story and wisdom you've put in it!
Gracie (Chapter 2) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Now that they know about her, they want her in the troupe. Its great that they live so close together, imagine the problems if she didn't go to the same school!
Gracie (Chapter 3) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Ahh, the beginning of a wonderful story together. Meeting people, getting it started. What a story already!
Gracie (Chapter 4) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
I love the progression of their friendship. It's so fluid, and realistic.
Gracie (Chapter 5) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
I like that Kagome looks at Sesshomaru so clearly. She doesn't ignore his disability, but she doesn't think any less of him either.
Gracie (Chapter 6) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
I can understand the whole routine learning because I have to do that with ballet but wow. Hearing it describes just highlights the best and worst parts of learning!
Gracie (Chapter 7) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
I love reading about their burns. It feels so alive to me, and you paint such a vibrant picture that it makes me feel like I'm there, seeing it. I might just take up burning if I ever get the chance!
Gracie (Chapter 8) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Omg their hair. Their hair! IT's white!
Gracie (Chapter 9) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Can I say perfect? I like that Kagome's never been kissed, it's sweet and gives her an air of innocence that she seems to have. I wish my first kiss was like that! And you mentioned it was your birthday soon in the author's note, and I know I'm reading this several years late, but happy birthday! When ever it may be :)
Gracie (Chapter 10) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Izayoi is so nice, and she gives Kagome such a blessing its hard for me to believe. It's fiction, so it's fine, I just can't read this chapter without being mind blown!
Gracie (Chapter 11) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
AHH tattoos! I adored the idea of Sesshomaru's tattoo, and Kagome's was rather fitting. Wow though, the idea of getting a tattoo while I am drunk is crazy to me, but I'm happy that they wanted to do it/ were okay with it in the morning!
Gracie (Chapter 12) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Loved, loved, loved this chapter. It was super hot and super sexy. Everything about them as a couple is perfect. Thanks soo much! (also ps its so cute that she says thank you!)
Gracie (Chapter 13) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Love the girl talk with Sango. I love stories where they're friends and they can talk so freely with eachother. And wow, still loving your writing style!
Gracie (Chapter 14) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
This fight with her mother is so sad. I understand it's necessary, but it breaKS my heart.
Gracie (Chapter 15) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
I feel like for me, I couldn't accept that kind of generosity, but it's so interesting how kagome deals with it. She definitely needs it, and iyazo is so nice
Gracie (Chapter 16) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
The smut was great, really great. I realized they weren't using a condom and I just u g h. It's them but wow, my relationship sensibilities couldn't let me be okay with no protection the first time!
Gracie (Chapter 17) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
I guess I'll work backwards and leave reviews from the last chapter to the first but you just deserve more reviews for this story. It's great that inuyasha at least thought about protection.
Gracie (Chapter 18) - Wed 26 Nov 2014
Wow I love this story so much! It's wonderfully written and has such a compelling plot! I love it, and thanks for writing at least this much, but wow I wish there was more.
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