ohmyGosh! I loved Sango and Miroku's little silent communication! That was totally awesome!
That part about Sesshomaru thinking that if he's going to keep Kagome he'll have to change her clothes was cute too. Actually I enjoyed the whole thing between his beast, Inuyasha's beast, and his logical side (or however you want to term it). That HIS beast is so thrilled about beating any others to Kagome is titilating. It will be interesting to see what happens if/when Inuyasha gets his youki back.
Also how is KAGOME going to react to this turn of events?
Thanks for writing!
He's already planning to change her? Oh, how little he knows her. Can't wait to see how that works out. :)
oh goodness... THAT'S likely going to have some very interesting repercussions.
Thanks for writing.
Kristen (Chapter 27) - Fri 11 May 2012
Wow, this has really been great so far :] I can't wait for the next update!
Kristen (Chapter 7) - Tue 08 May 2012
I really like this so far :D And this chapter was...Interestingly funny :]
YAY! For new chapter. That was a cute awkard moment. lol XD
D: I hope Rin gets better soon.
Awwww. He's cutting her hair himself. Such a good Daddy. Can't wait for more!
jhiz (Chapter 1) - Sat 10 Mar 2012
wow... wonderful storytelling ability... Your prose grabbed me right from the beginning and I am looking forward to reading more of this story. Since the first chapter was so impressive, I felt I needed to let you know you caught my attention well enough to keep mr reading. Hopefully the future chapters will be just as enjoyable to read. Thank you for sharing your skills.
Got to wait a whole week for an update now :( I am so curious as to what will happen next!
hikari.... gnééé :p (Chapter 21) - Thu 29 Dec 2011
Hayup
Another awesome chapter!!! Yayyy!!!
Ah, by the way, just so you know, children shouldn't take a whole acetamin pill (it's often 500 mg, or even 1 gr), it's a bit strong for pediatric use, it could be very bad for Rin's liver. Allergies to that medecine are very rare though. Be careful Kags, Sesshomaru would have your head ;)
Take care hon :D
Hikari-chan
Hikari-chan.... not signed in... :p (Chapter 20) - Tue 20 Dec 2011
So glad to see a new chapter, my friend!
You go Sesshy, of course you will conquer death, you're your father's son after all :p
Take care xxxx
Wonderful chapter.
Wonderful chapter. Poor Rin-chan. Poor Sesshomaru. It must be horrible to feel that he failed, even with Inuyasha's interference. Even if Sesshomaru did not do much to curtail his half-brother's impetuousness. Still... Sesshomaru did not START it so I understand how he blames Inuyasha.
I really like how Miroku is showing his disappointment in Inuyasha for what his actions caused too. I'm STILL miffed over it all. That poor, poor woman. :sniffles:
As for Paper-Rock-Scissors... I believe you're right. I do know that in 'Yu Yu Hakusho' at least it is often called simply 'Janken' however. I don't know much more than that or its translation.
Thanks so much for writing!
Sesshoumaru's actions are quite interesting and curiously confusing right now because there's nothing to hint at why he is acting somewhat civilly towards Inuyasha and somewhat kindly toward Kagome. Either way, it is an interesting beginning.
There are so many possiblities as to where this could go. Kagome might not know what having half of her sould ripped out feels like but she sure knows what having her whole soul ripped out. I find this story to be very interesting so far. Although the chapters are short, I'm okay with this since I read the description before starting and it said oneshot stories.
Awww don't worry Lass, SOME of us are good, nice, patient readers :p ....
You update often enough, and a long buildup is a good thing in my opinion. Good job, as always.
Take care my friend.
xxx
:laughs: High Ones! That was amuzing! I love Sesshomaru's sense of humor. Or was it merely a statement of fact? Kagome IS more accustomed to doing things insurmountable while human.
I'm so glad Shippou can understand him. That's sure to bring even more entertainment to come.
Thanks for writing!
:giggles: Sesshomaru lets Kagome climb him but Throws Inuyasha? :giggles: Too Funny!
Thanks for writing!
REDWOLF (Chapter 15) - Tue 25 Oct 2011
Ah....HA!!!! I found another great fic. Just added you to my favorites . I have read all chapters now, and I can't wait to read what's next. FANTASTIC!
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