update please!!!!

Good build up. I like how it rose.

Thanks for writing.

I like the mine comment. I can't wait to see that play out.

Club? Could be fun.

I love how Ayame has Sango's old sundress... with Sango's mother being none-the-wiser! :laughs:

You're welcome for the suggestion. :hugs: First chapter looks so much better now! ^_^

Thanks for writing!

For a high school setting... this could be fun. ^_^ Next time run it through a grammar/spellchecker though for a sharper, more polished look. :wry grin: There's little errors and typos in there that could be easily fixed.

I like the set-up so far. The library scene was particularly amusing. Curious to see where this will be heading.

Thanks for writing!