Omg this chaptler was even better than the first one. You still had some grammatical errors but like I said you can fix them. This is awesome all to awesome lol. I cant stop giggling I cant wait to get to the next chapter hurry u need to hurry up lol. I am hungry and bored omg y cant u update another chapter now so I can have something to do ugh  this just sucks eggs lol I called him and he was like ok I'll do it but wen I get home hahahahaha he is so easy lol he wud do anything 4 me and it is really heart warming. I think I am gonna eat out 2 nite lmao coz I dont wanna cook. Omg awesome story I honestly cannot wait till the next chapter. SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I WWWWWIIIIIILLLLLLLLLL AAAAAAAAAASSSSSSKKKKKKK PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PPPPPPRRREEEETTTTTTTTYYYY PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDDDAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN OOOOOOKKKKKKK omg I am so hyped 4 the next chapter plz dont disapoint.

OK so this story was quite the catch but 1 thing I found rong wit it was that u had some spelling errors u can fix that I just had 2 point it out. You are very talented and I cannot wait to read the next chapter. As for what you should put for the summary I will have to read later on in the lines and see wat  kind of events and out comes there is but total it out your firsst chapter was quite the catch. LOL and it is tempting me to ask my  to read it and see what he thinks of the story so far he is a critic he critisizes everything and if it is good he will give u a little heads up on he thinks you should put as the summary and stuff like that. Yea I think I would do that I am a bit anxious as to wat the next chapter would have in it thou ok. I hope this summs things up 4 u next time I will be reviewing harder on u ok just givin u a heads up. PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPP DDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN