the story is great, but there is a major discrepancy. You had Shippo tell Kagome the dog was Sesshomaru in the last chapter. This has created an imbalance in the chapter flow and makes Kagome look like a Magikarp.

ah... apparently she missed Shippou saying that the dog was Sesshomaru. I suppose I can understand that. Kagome WAS busy loving on the "puppy" at the time. :laughs:

Thanks for writing.

Aaah I see were you've made the changes in this chapter. :-) I cannot wait until Kagome realizes that she's been puppy fondling the Lord of the West. 

I don't see how Kagome couldn't know it was Sesshomaur. It's unbelievable, true, but Shippo, I think, told her. OOC characters, but kawaii :)

Did She Forget that the dog is Sesshomaru?

Ha! She didn't believe them when they told her it was Seas. She's so clueless! Love it!

It looks like canine Sesshomaru is leading the pack.  I knew it! I knew it! That Inuyasha and his ramen obsession heh heh. I'm waiting until it dawns on Kagome that this fluffy puppy is the Lord of the West. I mean, I realize she was already told, yet it seems it hasn't quite sunk in for her. Thank you for updating. 

This last chapter seems to ignore the previous one, so I'm a little confused.  They told her it was Sesshoumaru.  Does she just not believe them and that dialogue was left out or what?  I know she had a hard time believing it in the previous chapter, but I didn't get the impression that she decided that it wasn't him.  Please clarify.  I really enjoy the updates and look forward to the next one!

Oh. My. FISH!!! You had me rolling!!! I literally laughed out loud!! I LOVE this update!!! Thank you for it!! I look forward to more!!!

So cute.  But he can't really stay that way right?  Maybe for another chapter or two though... Thanks

Hahahaha Fluffy's So ADORABLE!!!!!!!! Love Miroku's little Bit that sound like him fosure.

Sesshomaru has the BEST courting! :laughs: Of course Miroku would be jealous of his natural talant. ;)

Thanks so much for writing.

Oh, puppy love.

Oh lawd have mercy Miroku, approves of Sesshomaru's approach to courtship! The perverted monk probably thinks this was some ingenious plan of the Inu Lord's, but it was all done in innocence. I fancy how Sesshomaru has no issue with appearing a bit "undignified" as long as it gets him his Kagome. Lollipaws truly are magical. ;-)  I cannot tell you what a pleasant mood your fic puts me in. Never have I thought I'd fancy such sweetness. This is coming from a brooding, I love blood and guts pain in the arse. I am absolutely head over heals in love with your story!

Ooooooooh my goooooodness HAHAHAHAHAAA! The lollipop and Shippo's reaction to the big ole puppy dog, Sesshomaru trying to court her with candy!!!!! Oh this is just too bloody precious for words. Inuyasha's outburst was also priceless and then came SIIIIIT! 

Hahahaa, I bet Kagome face-palmed.  Oh I can't wait for the update.

p.s. I hope the lollipop doesn't have slobber on it. 

Hahahahahahahahahah She Didn't Realize hehehe that shes hahaha holding Fluffy Sesshomaru so AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!

wow...a cute super big dog?he..he...

Hahahahahaha That is so Funny Sesshomaru just standing on top of the Well and Inuyasha Yellin at him.