Hm. Story's over. It was quite enjoyable. Sesshoumaru was terribly OOC and Kagome was... very manic pixie girl and super annoying, but it was cute. Your style of writing is easy to read and there were plenty of funny lines throughout
ponpiri (Chapter 364) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
I would be done with her after this.
ponpiri (Chapter 353) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
Yeah, and this wouldn't have happened had she stayed her untrained butt with the children. Isn't this what happened to his mother, and inu was off frolicking with kikyo?
ponpiri (Chapter 335) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
Yeah.. this is mad unrealistic. You're turning Sesshoumaru into Kagome and it's not cute. AND she's not really worth all this effort.
ponpiri (Chapter 270) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
I'm thoroughly disgusted with her and I'm all for keeping Sesshou's pride in tact.
ponpiri (Chapter 250) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
Woo. That was harsh, but truthful. Kago is extra clueless here or maybe she knows and she's just in denial? I always felt bad for her in the series, but when I read fanfics that involve this type of plot, I don't.
ponpiri (Chapter 174) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
She's really stalling the reunion with Inuyasha, huh.
ponpiri (Chapter 72) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
Ha! This story is really funny.
ponpiri (Chapter 51) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
She's asking him to apologize while she's trying to psychoanalyze him and tell him what HIS father was like and what he would have wanted? This story is cute and the two are definitely in character, but kagome's "innocence" borderline self-righteousness irritated me in these last two chapters. The nerve to be so arrogant and then demand an apology. I halfway want her to get yanked for being so childish.
Wonderful story, love the cut scenes at the end!
This had to be one of the best humor fics I have ever read on this site.
Hardly any of the stories in the "humor section" even make me crack a smile but yours had me belly laughing through almost the whole thing. I had to put my iPad down to laugh it was so funny. Your writing style is amazing btw.
And another thing, I hardly ever reviews for fics, even if I enjoy them. Your story compelled me to do so, I loved it that much.
actrivi (Chapter 420) - Fri 20 Nov 2015
Loved it! Thanks for writing!
susie (Chapter 420) - Sat 12 Sep 2015
Lol. I think the bit with Kagome mocking sesshomaru might be the best chapter:)
Divana (Chapter 420) - Wed 24 Dec 2014
This is one of my top favorites, just so you know. You are amazing! Lord Charming is a great story to be inspired by! Thank you for writing such a masterpiece! Maybe one day you could make a sequel! Anyway, you rock!
-Lala Insane-
Divana (Chapter 408) - Wed 24 Dec 2014
I love love love this story. I re-read it all the time! I love this chapter because you reference the ransom scene from the first season and have Kagome use Inuyasha's direct quote! Plus, this is by far the most strategically humorous stories I have ever come across! Never stop writing please! I hope you get to have your own work published! I am forever your fan!
PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL ABOUT THEIR COURTING PLEASE
Sapphyre (Chapter 297) - Tue 12 Nov 2013
My mom does everything in her power to embarrass the hell out of me. She came up to me at age 13 I'm Barnes and Noble and asked, "Sweetie, do you know what MASTURBATION is?!" I nearly fell over. Thought I should share that tidbit of my life with a lesbian mother. Lol I love her more than anything, but good lord, the things she says sometimes.
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