i read this again and i cryed! if you ever add more, maybe he can spend her second life both loving her and figureing out how to mke her life last aslong as her own!
* tears up* this is SUCH a beautiful love story! * soddens tishu, wetted by tears, with stuffy nose* I loved it, *grasps your arm like a frail old woman and wails* you are so aaamaaaazing for writing it!
well, great story....got a little carried away in this review-and if your wondering, no that was not sarcasm.
-BirdHummingAlong
papitas (Chapter 1) - Thu 18 Aug 2011
well written and really emotional. I liked how you displayed kagome and the metaphors you used. It was a sweet and beautiful story that I enjoyed reading. Really nice job!
I loved this, wholeheartedly!! I'm so sorry that it wasn't in time for the challenge, cuz I feel certain it would have given ladyb a run for her money! Simply beautiful, a unique take on what may have occurred following the end of the series/manga... excellent insight into Sesshoumaru and his thought processes as well. Can't wait to see more from you, m'dear!!
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~~Wiccan~~
That was just so lovely, moving and beautiful.
How tragic and sad and lovely and TRUE. Kagome would go stir crazy. Also, great job on Sesshoumaru in pain, brilliant!
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