“It's bad luck to leave volume's on odd numbers. Odd numbers as a whole are bad luck.”

I was rereading this, and couldnt help but roll with laughter. That is EXACTLY how I am in the car!! And then my boyfriend always tries to mess it up while I'm driving to see if I notice. LOL heart you bby!

LOVED the printer and shaving his eyebrow off bits!! Thank god I'm all alone while cracking up, else my fiance would think I've finally lost it ;)

Omg woman, you always make me die of laughter. At first I was like alright, I see the humor, I'm not laughing ou- OMG AHAHAHAHAHAHA. Lmao. You did a good job though setting in the story. I think it's way better that way then if you had made it hilarious from the beginning, it made it funny but with a touch of realism.

I like the fact that Kagome could hold her own against Sesshomaru. She didn't just bend to his deadly glare and will, she made him suffer, and it was fantastic ahah. Also, Im pretty sure it was that side of her that attracted him to her. Although the crazy side is pretty sexy. I like how you made her fear of tape a real fucking fear. For a second there I was like goddamn, bitch is gonna die, ahahah.

And MIROKU OMG PRICELESS. All those times Sesshomaru barged in for advice. Yes.

And the eyebrow thing. Lmao. This is why I love you.

i was freaking DYING the entire time! Awesome!

Very cute!  I think you handled the prompt wonderfully and it suits your style rather well; a sort of playful, silly rom-com.  I definitely enjoyed the harrassment of poor Sesshoumaru in the beginning.  His frustration was palpable and Kagome's neuroticism was a great contrast with his cool collectedness.  And I liked it when he hoisted her over his shoulder.  It was very unexpected and pretty funny.  I'd say the romance came a little fast for me, but I think considering how much you have to accomplish in a one-shot, there really was little other choice.  I also enjoyed Miroku's role and Kouga's brief appearance.  All in all, it was a very good story.  You have ladyb's Seal of Approval ;)

OMG that was funny. I loved it shadow. Well done.

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ROFLOLOL. Shadow, I appreciate your sense of humor SO much. I laughed throughout this entire story. Kagome's eccentric quirkiness and Sesshoumaru's cluelessness was so beautifully comical. So, so, so wonderful!

I don't know if I lauged more at Kagome's behaviour or Sess interrupting miroku's sex life... Pure hilariousnes!! good job dear. I loved this.

Yep, I'm screwed. Lol awesome job, love!

Hahahahaha... awesome. Kagome had me rolling on the floor and going to the bathroom more in 10min than I did the whole week :D... And Sessh jumping in Miroku's room every damn time he wanted to have sex, priceless XD

~lily

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! OH HOW I LOVE THEE HOW SHALL I COUNT THE WAYS!? One this is just so humorous that I nearly face planted more than once because I was laughing so hard! You did a great job with the humor it was . . . SNAPPY! At first you get all *chuckle* hey that is funny then BAM! SNAP! And you are laughing you bum off so hard you have to try and stop to avoid being yelled at by a sleepy monster momma~ I just went crazy over when Kagome gets the tape stuck to her and goes into a mini seizure b/c while at first you are all WTF IS SHE OKAY?! It becomes funny and you giggle so hard you look like wiggling jello! If that analogy makes any sense to you Shadow you need to stop being around me so much. xD

Also I really loved how in character everything was. While yes Kagome is a slightly off balance woman (in the best of ways) she still loves children, forgives, and is a complete spitfire!  At the same time you incorporated all her quirks (you did lovely with her OCD) in such a way it was normal. I also loved how in character Sesshy pants was! I found how he went to Miroku whenever he didn’t know how to handle something like trying to figure out when it was socially (and Kagome) appropriate to do some mad monkey something with Kagome. Sesshomaru a smart kid and wouldn’t risk his fragile relationship with Kagome by being proud.  Plus his I don’t give a flying wombat about you when it came to interrupting Miroku and Sango was spot on as wells humorous with how many poor doors he killed. And I just loved Kagome somehow in character quirks, particularly when she re-drew his eyebrow after shaving it off so it would grow back correctly. It fit so well because believe it or not that was nice of her, imagine if she hadn’t done it and just gone crazy in public and pinned him down and shaved it in front of everyone? Hahahaha :x You should have had her do that!

As a side note the eyebrow thing was my second favorite part! My most favorite was when Kagome took the picture and basically told him, god you are ugly in pictures! XD That part made me laugh so hard it hurt!

What I loved most though was Sesshomaru and Kagome’s relationship! While it was the love/hate-annoyance sort it wasn’t cliché or typical. With most love/the relationships one or both people are in denial and all I CAN’T LOVE YOU until the end yet with yours Sesshomaru and Kagome accepted everything as it came. And their dynamic is wonderful in the way that they are completely over the top with each other (like by killing the sterio) yet are completely sincere. One part that made me all warm and squishy inside was when Kagome told Sesshomaru about her Pa and he made the connection between the floor number and her OCD with odd numbers. While this is sad yes it showed that Sesshy cared AND was most importantly listening to her!  And I loved how he was gentle and seduced her! It was in character and oddly funny/sweet.

Over all this is so awesome that I can’t think of any adjectives BESIDES awesome. You are such a mind grenade! YOUR FIC IS AN AWESOME FILLED MIND GRENADE! And it has blown me away! This was so funny and sweet and out there that it made me leave this ridiculously long review that doesn’t even properly sum up all my feelings! From now on I shall STALK you just for some more splendiferous writings and humor like this! (I’m only under your porch because I love you) <3 <3 <3

Tangie~

P.S. I love you! And your writing! And forgive my over use of exclamation points! xD

yeah about that chapter.... srsly dude my readers prolly think i hijacked it and refuse to post it >.> thanks a lot. Anywho the story is awesome and you already know I about died laughing when i read the end. Great job!