amy (Chapter 1) - Sun 14 Aug 2011

Gorgeous !


Scherherazade (Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Aug 2011

The story was sweet and appealing.  For the most part the wording was fine and your charactrization was good.  But your spelling was pretty bad and somewhat distracting.  You were obviously spelling words the way they sound and that was how I was able to follow along.  Unfortunely I kept losing track of the story as i mentally respelled things.  Spell check or a beta could help you with that. Other than that good job.


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