Keep it coming.
***clapping***. Well done, the insight into each was a great idea. Inuyasha needs to move veto and let her go. He had his chance and blew it. I can't wait for Kags to wake up and find herself wrapped in the arms of n the Inu Lord. Hehehe, it's gonna be a shocker! I look forward to watching the relationship grow!
Pricila (Chapter 9) - Sat 06 Oct 2012
I love it! You are doing a great job with the story and I can't wait to read the rest as you write it!
This story is amazing, keep it coming.
I absolutely love this. It is very different and it makes you wanna find what is going to happen. I am curious. Will Shippo be the same or ever talk to her???
-TheNight-
Wow...this is turning out to be a very good story and I really like it. Please update soon!
This was a very amazing story so far, and I'm surprised that I haven't heard of it before! I absolutely love how disgustingly morbid some of the descriptions are- it's great! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Nilee1 (Chapter 9) - Sun 30 Sep 2012
I just found your story today. It's wonderful although I was often teary-eyed. You are a very good writer. I can't wait for your next chapter!
dark (Chapter 8) - Tue 29 May 2012
this story is so amazing! i have to admit you took me by surprise with shippos silence but it adds a lot to the drama so its really nice. the change in the others is welcome too it only means more will be add in their lives. i cant wait to se rins reaction to her new body... ill admit a tear crossed the line with me not listening when i told him not to fall! chapter 6 was great i mean rins words were so cute ad to that the way she begs to know if sesshomaru will remember her and that was it for me!i hope everything turns out ok at kagomes wake i really cant wait! btw your writing is excellent and very ...hmm...pulling a few commas missed but darnit i havent been this entertained in a long while. please update soon!
wow. That was totally intense. I've a feeling even when Kagome can fully convince herself that her visions were only that she will continue to have nightmares about them.
Thanks for writing!
You're so mean!!!!!!!! You can't leave it at that! Cliffhangers always kill me. More please! ^_^
MAN!! That was so evil, a cliffy. evil I say pure and simple. BTW AAAAsommmme!
Caith Sidhe (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Feb 2012
Nice work, I like your story. Good imagination, interesting plot and you keep your readers in suspense. Just consider using less style elements. First person POV of more than one character, narration and dialog all mixed together makes it a bit confusing. Dropping the first person POVs would make the story much smoother and easier to handle. This is not a flame, just a piece of advice. You’ve got talent and I am looking forward to more chapters and stories.
Really like this! Sure, all the stress is hard... but the story is riviting.
I'm glad Sesshomaru didn't have to oust someone from their body to have one for Rin. Having his mother be precognitive about that was a really neat touch.
I agree... Kagome and Shippou needed more. The breakdown fit.
Thanks for writing.
I absolutely love this story! I love the scenes with Kagome and Shippo my heart just broke for both of them! Oh Sesshoumaru's mother has a sister this I find intriguing! I can't wait to see Kagome fight for Rin's soul! I know this is going to change Her relationship with everyone especially Sesshoumaru! More please!
wudelfin (Chapter 7) - Thu 23 Feb 2012
Now that was fantastic. keep up the good work!! hope to see more updates soon!!
this is turning out to be a splendid story. i can't wait to read more chapters, please update soon:)
Venita (Chapter 6) - Wed 15 Feb 2012
Great chapter.
Did you know that Whitney Houston pass away on febraury 11, 2012?
HAPPY VALENTINE DAY!!
outstanding work...greedy for more
Anonymous (Chapter 6) - Tue 14 Feb 2012
Que porqueria.
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