Update! Update! Update! You can't leave us hanging like this! So am I getting this right, that the Darkness left part of itself in the "prison" when it broke free and this is what Kagome is fighting with now? Either way, UPDATE SOON!!
Hello,
I really like your idea about the creation of the world and Light and Darkness! I'm sorry for Kagome that she has to absorb the soul of the Darkness, her sibling, and will have to live with it forever...
The relationship between Kagome and Bokuseno is a special one! It is not simply a friendship, it is so much more - love, trust and respect! Absolutely beautiful!!! This person must have been really special to you.
I love all the chapters which had the focus on Kagome and Shippo! The poor boy was hiding a part of his soul in Kagome to establish a deeper connection with her and when she left he had to live without this part of his soul. You had me nearly crying. I feel so sorry for him :'( I'm glad that he felt that he can trust Kagome and tell her his secret, he has suffered enough as it is. You surprised me when you had him grow up so suddenly, but your explanation was absolutely logically!!!
I'm curious to see what Rin is exactly able to do! So far she was able to read minds - at least Shippo's - and had for a moment the ability of a seer.
I hope you will work on this fic again and I look forward to your next update!
Oyabun (Chapter 10) - Fri 27 Apr 2018
I think the premise of this is really interesting and I loved the Rin transference, but I can't do the relationship between S and K with zero buildup. The suddenly in love thing is my biggest peeve for any pairing. Everything else is pretty great, though, so I'm sad. Good writing like this is hard to come by. Happy writing.
Kirsten (Chapter 25) - Thu 07 Sep 2017
I hope you and your loved ones are all safe and well!! Great chapter, as always <3
Alma (Chapter 25) - Fri 01 Sep 2017
Stay safe and dry. Be strong and everything will turn out as it should. I hope you can keep up with your story and deal with all other things that are occuring, we will be waiting until the time is right for the next installment. Be strong Texas, we are praying for everyones safety.
I'm always excited to see what you'll be posting next and I'm sorry you've been did affected by Harvey. Hang in there and God Bless!
Fine job on the fight scene. Shippo is still very creepy.
I always love when Miroku gets a moment on stage and you created a womderful mix of pain and passion for him to share with a proper twist of logic. Thank you for the reapect shared on secondary characters.
Great description of the ritual inside the whereever they ended up. I also found the conversation between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru particularly well done. Hmm, i would have more problems with Shippo, the son, image than the brother. Very creepy... Good job.
It seems so very fitting that even when dying, Rin focuses on her Lord. Very good portrayal.
Eve (Chapter 26) - Wed 30 Aug 2017
I send you my best wishes.
I'm glad that you and your family are ok. Given what's going on it's no problem to keep waiting for your next update. Take care of yourself and your family and then worry about posting.
kathryn (Chapter 1) - Tue 29 Aug 2017
I don't review often but I hope all is well and will continue to await your next update thanks for the entertainment of your stories and may you and your family stay safe
I hope your fine, honey bunny. Patience is a virtue and we could more than wait given your circumstances. Just look after yourself and family first, Kay?
Nothing to apologize for, I don't punish people for things beyond their control. As long as yor safe, that's all that matters. *hugs*
Glad to hear you're safe. The situation is really bad down in Texas. I hope that when you are able to assess the damage, you find it not too bad. I know it's unrealistic to expect no damage, so I hope whatever you find isn't bad instead.
Sending hugs!
allicia (Chapter 26) - Tue 29 Aug 2017
I'm glad u and ur family are ok just take your time and get your life back to normal and don't worry about pleasing us we just want u safe right now please make sure u get somewhere safer cause there is more rain headed that way I live in Arkansas so we get after effects it's flooding here too but not as terrible so keep safe
Praying for you and your family.
I'm just glad you are safe. Being in the Dallas area and seeing the devastation there in yours has been crazy. Your fans support you and wish you the best. Your life is more important, so take the time you need. We'll be Here!
Peace and Blessings
It's fine hun. I'm just glad that you're all right. ^_^ Please, take all the time you need.
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