Okies... wasn't expecting Naraku to be the girls' father. That's sick and twisted.
And HIGH ONES!! :scowls: I Hate inupapa. :glares: Such a Jerkface. I almost was expecting him to confess he put holes in the condoms or something like that, PLANNING for such a thing to tie Sesshomaru down. Doesn't matter... nothing Kagura tries will work on Sesshomaru now. He won't stop until he knows where Kagome is. Not if he can help it. I can even see him giving up everything for her. That's how I see THIS Sesshomaru.
Thanks for writing.
Wow! This is actually so heart-wrenching to see him desperately looking for Kagome! It was almost as if he knew something was very wrong (even though he probably already knew that)...Sure hope he can get her before Naraku could manage to kill her, like he did to Kikyou years ago.
Poor Kagome-all of those traumas...and without much of her parents' presences too. That wouldn't be good for anyone, especially at that young age, where the parents are so sorely needed...:( I sure hope that her parents grow up too. Same goes for Sesshoumaru's as father well, seeing as the expectations of him were too high, in my opinions. Mr. Taishou need to allow him some happiness for once.
Pardon me for assuming but is there a chance that Naraku could be Kagome and Kikyou's real father? The story did mention of Mrs. Higurashi's habit of cheating (also for Mr. Higurashi as well)...So I'm just wondering. :) I like mysteries, hahah.
Of course Naraku could be very disillusioned though. There's always that chance.
One thing that is a bit odd to me and forgive me if I sounded like an idiot-I might have misread somewhere in the story, but Sesshoumaru in a high school and is 25? @_@; Ah, never mind. ^^;
Anyhoo, I love all of the characters and how they seemed to be so real! You did an excellent job! ♥ (Miroku and InuYasha, you idiots...D: )
I look forward to the next chapter! <3
Rai (Chapter 15) - Tue 20 Sep 2011
That just turned out to be one HELL of a twist! I never thought that would be Naraku's role in the twins' life. Please, let her be found by Sesshoumaru ASAP. (hahaha, I know I'm wishing for too much. :P) You just got me hanging! How would Yuzuru feel if she knows that her, once, lover has captured Kagome once again? Can't wait for the next update! :D *sits in one corner, waiting*
Tiegrsi (Chapter 15) - Tue 20 Sep 2011
Oh, that is an F-ED up twist! And Taishou telling Kagura to seduce Sesshou too? Please update again soon...I love the suspense and the twists...even the angst and brutality, but I'm DYING to find out what happens when Sesshou finds out what happened! ill he try to kill Naraku? Will Kagome stop him because the bad guy is actually her dad? Will the snake-like lawyer be in a pinch when everything is brought into the light? What will Kagome's parent's do when they find out? What was her mother THINKING? Did her mom KNOW it was the man she "loved" that took her daughters? OMG. Hurry! LOL.
Ugh, such a creepy (very in character) Naraku! Ooo, I just want to smack that man!
Not liking Papa Taisho either....or the Higurashi's attorney.
I wonder, did Papa H know about Mama H's little affair and that the girls were not his? Hence the reason for not being around for them? Please tell me there's light at the end of the tunnel...
Rai (Chapter 13) - Sun 18 Sep 2011
I knew it would be someone like NARAKU! Hah! I want MORE! MORE! :3 Sorry for reviewing a little too late. I happened to be hooked by it since the first chapter that I didn't want to stop reading, only to find out that I'm on the recent chapter and that nothing follows after. It's creepy in so many ways, I so like it. Can't wait for the next chapter! Never been this eager to wait for more! :D
Tiegrsi (Chapter 13) - Thu 15 Sep 2011
Well...damn. I wasn't expecting THAT. I do hope you update again soon because now I am REALLY needing to see Sesshou come in as the knight in shining armor to kill Naraku and save Kagome. Poor girl. :(
jgem (Chapter 1) - Thu 15 Sep 2011
The summary for your story was intriguing enough that I thought I would give it a go. At first, I wasn't sure if I would enjoy it once I saw it took place in a high school setting but I found that your dialogue and interactions were witty without it ever becoming one of those "look how tough/cool I am" that seems to plague high school AU fics. I also like that the high school settting is really secondary to the main storyline which while dark, is extremely intriguing. I could write lots more of what i like, but since I just read all 13 chapters, it would take awhile. Let's leave it at "This is a great story."
UPDATES! WE NEED UPDATES! lol
cakeiton (Chapter 10) - Wed 14 Sep 2011
*heart... broken... scattered over my keyboard...*
cakeiton (Chapter 5) - Wed 14 Sep 2011
gah! I'm so glad there's more chapters, cause i need to know whats goign to happen!
cakeiton (Chapter 3) - Wed 14 Sep 2011
oooOOOOOooooo Heated!
just fyi, i'm not getting any work done while reading your story lol
cakeiton (Chapter 2) - Wed 14 Sep 2011
hahaha second. SECOND! Thats funny.
Also, Kag's mom is a b!!!!!!!!!!!!!!tch
cakeiton (Chapter 1) - Wed 14 Sep 2011
that mirror beginning TOTALLY got me hooked
Oh crap!... poor kagome... I really hope sesshoumaru finds her. Hopefully she will struggle enough her locket will be left at the grave for him. :(
Wow, really aweseome work. You had me crying with Kagome's talk with Miroku.
Need more. Please. Thank you.
Kmc27 (Chapter 11) - Mon 05 Sep 2011
Reading this chapter makes me want to shout "Go SAFARI!!!"
Kagome CAN NOT sit around being sad. I say she's smart enough to disapear for a few years without anyone knowing, including her B***** parents (Those people make me want to hit something!!!)
Go safari, be a doctor in the middle of knowwhere, help some people! DON'T SULK!!!
Waiting for the next chapter!!!, NO MORE SULKING, FIGHT BACK!!!
Kylie (Chapter 9) - Tue 30 Aug 2011
Your ability to make me Laugh and Cry in the same chapter is amazing!!!!
Never stop writing!
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