Great story, keep it coming.
I'm sitting on the edge of my seat ! ah , I want MORE lol
Zeelian (Chapter 2) - Sun 24 Mar 2013
The story seems promising but i just can't make myself continue reading due to the constant use of Sesshomaru-dono instead of sama, it just does not sit right with me and having it nagging in the back of my head takes my focus of the story.
...as if there isn't enough with which to deal? :sighs: Well then... I can only hope in learning how to have and show "feelings" to/with Kagome will lead to him wanting to mate her otherwise, wanting to mate or not, he's Screwed.
Thanks for writing.
Smortz (Chapter 13) - Mon 10 Oct 2011
:O Two chapters of goodness. -bows to the floor- Thank you!!!
:) I am loving it! Oh, I can't believe it.... a better deal cause we're humans... Ha! -snorts-
Can't wait for more!
~Smo
i always feel bad for Kagome... i mean everyone always talks about reincarnation this and that... gee that would drive me nuts! :( can't wait for the next update! i love the story! :)
another great chapter! must read more! :)
hm i thought Haru was the one out there hiding! I'm surprised... Sesshoumaru trusts Haru? or does Haru have no choice lol
yeah i hope he appreciates it too! poor Kagome!!! O.o
i definitely like your story so far! :) i always felt bad for Sesshoumaru.. it just seemed like he never had a loving mother.. :/ that really affects a person..
haha of course Koga gets invovled - oh this will definitely be interesting!!! hahaha XD
yeah, i can't believe Sesshoumaru agreed to the 'feelings' part... interesting that he's thinking about it!
interesting.. i guess i didn't expect that! i must read more! :)
hm that's so like Kagome... lol she would think about others!
aw i feel bad for Kagome! she's pretty upset! but i love the story! :)
haha "path mix" lol XD my overall reaction was something like this: O_O lol this is an interesting story and i'd like to see what happens next! :)
So, Kagome will be without her power for a whole year? though, I wonder, how do you subdue a power that comes from the soul?
Nice story, and I juse love Haru. Letches are always the most amusing ones and that 'Comparing yourself to him doesn't help your cause.' knocked my on my butt, I laughed soo hard. XD
Can't wait for more
~lily
amy (Chapter 8) - Mon 05 Sep 2011
Fantastic more chapters please!
Pebbles (Chapter 8) - Mon 15 Aug 2011
I like the introduction to new characters and plots here. And is it me, or whenever there's a witch in a fanfic, don't they make it soooo interesting? Because they are unattached to the main group and they intefere in the most interestnig ways. I like her, Cho. I didn't catch this fic in it's first go, I'm glad I'm reading now.
Whee! I think this story will be fun! I can't wait to see how Kagome and Sesshoumaru will get along when they actually start spending time together.
Also, here: "The wolf and hanyou continued to face off; neither saying a word. Eventually, Kaogme let go and backed away." Should be Koga instead of Kagome, right?
Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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