Its alright. There are a few spelling errors.

The most hillarious part of the chapter was how you ended it with "I'm done" LOL

I like it 

Very cleverly done.  And I was expecting something a bit more sexual... but this was funny.  : )

:busts out laughing: NOBODY saw that coming!

Thanks for writing!

Alrighty yall i finished it.

I kinda like where this is heading cant wiat to read more :D Have fun with the troop!

I didn't even bother logging in just so I could review. You tease! Ugh lol, love it......haha I bet Kagome is about to piss her self from the excitement and surprise.

WHAT DID HE DO!?!??!?! Damn I'm so nosey!!!!!! But really good job, the chapters are a littl on the short side than wat I'm used to but they are ell written so I can handle that. Cant wait to see what he did!

OMG next chapter PLEASE?! Great start I loove how you just went ahead and delved right in.

ase!More updates please!