First off let me start by saying I enjoyed this story emensly. Coming from a family with 3 practicing pagans and being a person of many spiritual beliefs myself I do know of the ritual of Beltane. I'm also a fan of the "King Aurthur mythology" and his sister was a maiden and later Lady of the Lake so I'm quite impressed with your accurassy of the discription of the rituals for Beltane. Now I would like to say once again I loved this story because Sesshomaru claimed Kagome as his mate at the completion of the cerimony. I love the way he did it by telling her she was carrying his pup and she was now his mate. Thank you for creating such a captivating story.
this is still a REALLY hot lemon! and i cant even lie, i'd LOVE to see something of an after!
dianne (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jan 2012
| Hands down my new favorite oneshot!
:D This was an amazing piece of work and I look forward to reading more of you work.
Danielle (Chapter 1) - Wed 07 Sep 2011
GOD DAMN!!!! Don;t hyou do anything half assed? I think I need to take a break and have a cold shower... My poor husband can't keep up with all these ideas your putting into my head!!!! Why can't Youkai be real??? You write masculinity so well! *Shudder* Yup time for a nice cold shower.
wickedone43 (Chapter 1) - Wed 20 Jul 2011
Wow! I have been rendered speechless. There are no words to describe this....wow!
I look forward to reading more of your works. This fic is absolutely wonderful, stupendous, hot!
Wow!!
the incorporation of the ritual was interesting! gj!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
please don't let the story end here it is to good not to continue
amy (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Jul 2011
Wonderful new story line, Kagome a huntress!wow!
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*pokes someone to enter GMCHALLENGE* *POKES MORE* O_O
DAMN that's hot!
That was awesome. Loved the one-shot dear!
Very, very yummy! Very well written, and I totally love how you accurately portrayed a version of the Great Rite. BRAVO!
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