Wonderful chapter dear :D I love the life lesson vibe to this story, and especially this chapter. It isn't done in a cliche manner either which I wicked love <3
I really like the idea of her photo project, especially the description of Sango's photos. Also, her assessment of Sess's outer beauty being the opposite of within is good. If she can capture some turmoil he's gotten himself over, or some inner scar with her photos, then maybe he can change. Awesome, looking forward to more.
I love this story! Keep it up!
That was great!!! :) I LOVED it!!! Thank you so much for entering!!! Just grab your token when you feel like it lol.
i like this start and am very curious where it is headed! also, sango's picture sounds very artistic
Smortz (Chapter 1) - Wed 13 Jul 2011
I do have a question.... Can you handle the truth?!!?!?!?!?!?!
>_> Now that it is out of my system... -cleares throat- I liked this! I love how in-depth it was with the meaning to everything.. Can't wait to read the next prompt!
~Smo
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