Hi this is missing chapter 17-18. Otherwise I love it!

i finished this in a matter of hours and i must say this was worth reading. it was confusing at first, but then i realized it was out of order. this the 2nd story i've read from you and i wasn't disappointed. keep up the great writing. c'ya'

This is still one of the best stories I have ever read on here. But you should really fix that chapter mix up. Or put an author note there. Nope you should fix it. I promise it will really make the story. I still love this, i think i read it like 2 years ago. Sigh I still want more

I have read this before, you need to fix this error with the chaptees order please. It kinda kills the flow and turn an excellent story into a jumbled mess. Sigh this scene would have been perfect with the one before

It's so cute. Keep up the good work.

Thanks for sharing ^^

Wonderful story!

this story was simply beautiful and i loved every second of it. cant wait to read more of your works. till then,

KAR

A nice ending to a tale that spans time itself. I like this ending much better for them than the other one. I'm all for tragic lovers but happy endings are much more my style. I like that he told her eventually and that just brought them closer. Wonder why Kagome was resistant at first but oh well it worked out. I really have enjoyed the story and hope there is more like it to come :)

there is only one thing i hav to say about this which is AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!! ^^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHY DID IT END??? Plz plz plz if you can write an epilogue, it be nice to know they did end up forever happy. Either way your story was amazing!!! I loved it and i'm sad that its over. Great job!! I'm soooo happy i came accross it. It has been added into my list of memorable fics. :D

skipped 17 & 18 put them up soon please!

I must say I liked this story from the start to the end, but could you please write an epilogue, because I´d like to know how the past sessh came to care for kags, it´s just a suggestion though. Good work!!!!

This has been really good. Even with teh rush on their relationship you still feel like you got everything out of it that you were suppose to. It seems like they have been together for a while and know each other so well. It really is a pitty that they didn't make it in the end. but then again, the Sesshoumaru from the past made sure that that wouldn't be their ends. Will he still be able to meet her and mate with her? How much has he changed the future? Hopefully this isn't the end and we get to see more and what happens (in their lives together again)!! I can't wait to see what happens next :)

You skipped chapters 17 & 18...

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oh my god!
this is so exciting!!!!
plz update soon!!! 

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OMG!!!! This story keeps getting better and better. You're an awesome writer!!!