Hello,
since I find your fic "Reason for War" so far amazing, I thought I should check out your other storys too, so here I am :)
I love the relationship between Rin and Sesshoumaru, you did a really nice job here!!! Rin is a strong young woman now and perfectly capable to protect herself and she is at the same time that young girl who adores Sesshoumaru and would follow him willingly to the end of the world. And Sesshoumaru is of course overprotective and gets territorial where his little girl is concerned :P
Also the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru is a nice one. They are arguing sooo much and I have always something to laugh about :D Sesshoumaru seems to be a bit ooc in some scenes, but I don't see it as a big problem.
I'm so happy to see, that you let those resurreted by Tenseiga have a special bond to this sword, I find it absolutely logically and often thought so myself. Let's see if they will be able to find it!
I'm not quite sure if I understood how they all came to be in that strange place, but I'm sure that you will give us more information in the next chapters.
I was shocked that you let Kagome be raped while unconciousness, but I'm sure that he will be ripped apart for his crimes!
I'm curious to see where you will be going with this story and look forward to your next update!
All four chapters are great, please update the next chapter quickly!
Natalia (Chapter 37) - Sun 23 Jul 2017
So he's raping her while she is unconscious? So disgusting! It's like s twisted snow-white! Wonder how you'll spin this!
hmmm, wonder what thats about,is Kagami helping Sess manifest in the real world?
Wonderful chapter, Sess's care for both kids is so sweet, and his worry for Kagome too! I wonder where he is keeping her soul, and how long it'll take him to realize that Kagami has hidden her mirror...
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