Starfyre (Chapter 1) - Tue 30 Apr 2013

This story has a lot of poteintal. There are a lot of spelling errors that would normally be caught by a spell checker in a document writer like word, or openoffice.

Other than that you can go to the forums under the fanfiction forum there is a thread for people who are looking for a beta to help them find willing betas.

I would like to see the next chapter of this.

I would offer to beta, but I have so much demand on my time right now that it would be next to impossible for me to be quick with returning someone else's work and that would not be fair to you.

You could use as well to help you with checking spelling. I do that sometimes. It works pretty well. Just in case you don't find a beta in a timely fashion.

I would like to know why InuYasha, Sango, and Miroku left her and Shippo like that. I know what they said was the reason, but there are the questions of: Is that really them? Is that them thinking clearly? Are they really thinking that, and why? What happened?

I want to just tag along with them and crawl inside their heads to see if maybe there is something happening that we don't know about. Maybe Kagome is under a spell and this is all some twisted dream, that would explain the well suddenly not working. There are so many things that you could do with this story.

I look forward to more!


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