AND I am glad to help! Thanks for the dedication too! Had me grinning like a fool :)
Smo,
I love how this turned out! This is absolutely wonderful! Though, I will admit its making me angry at Sesshomaru!
Keep up the fabulous work!
Love,
Caleesci
Nilee1 (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
What the hell was he thinking; she's right, he's no better than Inuyasha. In fact, he's worse--jackass!
amy (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
So he is marrying Kagura? good luck , he is going to need it! Kagome was the best woman for him but he doesn't see it! more updates pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Sarah (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
All I can say is...THAT JERK!!!!
Anyway, I have been following all of you stories and I just wanted to let you know that I <3 all of them so far. It's pretty rare that I get into a story enough where I deeply empathize with a character, yet that is exactly what I find myself doing with this story. Good stuff! Very good stuff indeed.
KT (Chapter 3) - Sun 24 Jul 2011
Ouch, wolves are canines-ish aren't they.... lol
I just love this story, even if Sess is clueless. (ah, males..just shows that how they think can transend the species)
Can't wait for the next update!
amy (Chapter 2) - Wed 20 Jul 2011
Is she really moving on?lease more updates!
Im going to tell you I was clearly upset by then end of this chapter, it was so powerful I was almost in tears. I love where this story is going and I cant wait to see what happens next. There are so many angles that can be approached. I mean what will his father say he loves Kagome so much as a daughter. Will Sesshomaru go through with the marriage even though it seems as though he feels something for Kagome. Why did it end so abruptly between them when she went to medical school? I mean you said he always went to her with advice? Seems like there is more to what he is feeling that he is letting be known.
I just find it strange, what is she to him exactly? Has she been with anyone else after him? I dont know, my heart hurts for her because it does seem like all he did was use her. She has every right to tell him that he was acting like Inuyasha. Its only right to save her heart to cut off all communication with him or Inuyasha. He will then have to deal with his own feelings. Anyways, love this story cant wait for more ^_^
Dun dun dunnnnn I loved the new addition! Such plot twists :P
Dear Smortz,
I am so in love with your story! It is very captivating, I keep glancing at the side bar and I get so discouraged when it gets below halfway :( I really love the way you made Kagome. My biggest pet peeve is when she is created as some sort of super strong and brash woman. You have proven her to be an independant woman with real weaknesses. She isn't crass or rude, she is polite yet strong. Really well done!
Love,
Caleesci
Loveyaa (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Jul 2011
Even though your story is only 2 chapters (so far hopefully) it is quite intriguing and interesting. It tends to draw you in and feel what the characters are feeling. I don't know who to root for and hope they get what's coming to them. Hopefully everything works out for everybody (more or less). I wonder how things will go from here what with Kagome refusing to go to the wedding and moving. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm sure Kagura is feeling pretty smug :)
That was great Smo!!! :D I loved it, and yes of course the way you used the quote is acceptable :) I loved the way you used it by the way :)
Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Jul 2011
love this story line and cant wait for the next chapter.
oh my gosh! i was instantly taken with this story!! please update soon!!!
Jackie (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Jul 2011
Omg omg omg!!! Such a great story! I cant waitto read more! Whos is she gonna see?! OH please update soon!
Blaire (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Jul 2011
omg. I don't care if you only update when there is a new quote! you must update today!
Julie (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Jul 2011
Hey so this is really good so far. I seem to really like alot of your stories cause i have been reading striking a deal with devil
and was plesantly suprised to see your writing this one too!!!
That was great!!! :) I loved it!! :) Go ahead and grab the banner and token(s) whenever you want :)
Only one littl crtique, you mentoned in the beginning when Kagome was talking to Inu Tashio that "Sara went all out" I think you ment Kaugura or use another character. just a fyi. Other than that I love where this story is going and I wanted to know if Inu Tashio os married in this one. He looks like he has eyes for Kagome...lol
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