So strangely beautiful and heart wrenching. I love the dynamics between the two in this fic. The end where they are laughing in the rain after nearly almost killing each other (and the way they did) is sheer genius. Well done.

This has always been my favorite :)

Yay!!! What a lovely story!! I really enjoyed how belivably the charactsrs were portrayed, especially Sesshoumaru. The situation you put him in was a tough sell, but you pulled it off splendidly! Overall, it was a lovely little tale and I would have loved to read more. I'm a terribly picky reader, but I'll definitely be checking out more of your work! Thaks so much for sharing!

~Sianna  

Quite bittersweet and yet enjoyable. I guess misery does like company. but at least it led to something good this time. Quite enjoy your oneshots :)

WOW! I hope you turn this into a chapter story, this is AMAZING!!!!

This is so good. The description is so detailed and amazing that its easy to picture such a day in my mind. Not only the description of the day but of Sesshoumaru's feelings. You brought out so many emotions in me. I laughed and cried and could feel Sesshoumaru's desperation and hopelessness. Your story has left me with a surprising mix of both happiness and sadness (if that makes any sense at all)

The ending was just perfect. Just enough of a tease to let my imagination dwell on what the future holds for them both. Great job.

Good lord, this was just DELICIOUS.  I love it, so much so that I'm definitely keeping a copy of it for future reading offline!!  In case you're wondering, I'm just NOW discovering the delights that are your other stories aside from Corona, which I have faved.  Yes, I'm woefully remiss in not checking out all the other offerings by an author that I truly enjoy... lashes with a wet noodle??  Srsly, though, I love this oneshot - TOTALLY!!

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~~Wiccan~~

;___; Not only is this beautiful, with how visual, so that I can see them perfectly, without really describing the scene (I loved the details of the rain), but the emotions in this pack a whollop like a hammer. Beautiful, and sad, and introspective, and wonderful. I am adding you to my favourite authors list so I can keep an eye on you. x'D

awesome story, wish there was a sequel!

Very nice!  I really liked it.  I would so appreciate a follow-up or what is the literary term...sequel.

Nice work.  Hope to read more!

It was fantastic! I cried, I'll admit it, and when you can pull that kind of emotion from a reader, you've know you've done something right. The struggle was just so perfect, and I really appreciate tht it wasn't just another flowery 'Oh, I found you! Now I have something to live for and I think I'm in love with you!' piece. Not saying those are always aweful, but it's getting a bit cliche. I really adore the realistic aspects of it. Great job.

If this is your first submission, well... I'm really looking forward to more work from you. This was beautiful, and you are practically bursting at the seams with talent. I can already tell that you're going to fall into my favorite author category pdq!

I eagerly await more! So *ahem* don't make me wait too long. ;)

oh that is so beautiful and dark, i love it