Reviews for The Assistant by Smortz

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henandchicks (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

Oh, what a chapter!  I was rolling with laughter.  Shippo saying "I would think you were some sort of molester"  and then Sesshomaru saying "it was not one of my proudest moments!"  - priceless.  Just hilarious!  And then, with it all got real, with Kaagome asking what happened after she left.  I'm not sure I'm going to enjoy the next chapter, as it can't help but have a great deal of sadness in it (unless Sesshomaru can't bring himself to tlalk about it yet).  But I do love, love, love this story.  Wonderful storyline.  Hilarious!  Sweet!  Can't wait for more!


henandchicks (Chapter 5) - Wed 09 May 2012

I am loving this story!   Really entertaining.  You mentioned Kouga - I can't wait to see him again!  His interest in Kagome could spur Sesshomaru into action, after all.


joyouki (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

OMG I haven't laughed that hard from a chapter forever...The part where Sess's fingers got wrapped in her bikini top and he threw it...Oh my the giggles are starting again....Loved that chapter!


Pricila (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

Wow, I am in love with your story and how you keep it all tied together as you takes us across the continent!  Can't wait to read the next chapter.


Pricila (Chapter 4) - Wed 09 May 2012

LOL, that is too funny Shipp? a model!   LOL


Alice (Chapter 8) - Wed 09 May 2012

Kagome is so cute when she is flustered. 


Kayelyn (Chapter 8) - Tue 08 May 2012

I know I should feel bad for Sesshomaru, and I do...somewhat, but that was too hilariously awkward for me to not laugh at his expense!

Thank you so  much for this update, and I hope that all goes well with your finals!

Love-kaye


Calypso (Chapter 7) - Tue 17 Apr 2012

Wonderful, intriguing chapter as always, Smo! Sigh, poor Kagome. Shippo's all grown up now.

 

You leave me wondering what Sess will do the next chapter.


RubyJeweler (Chapter 7) - Sun 15 Apr 2012

Smo,

You are doing a mighty fine job of enthralling us. Hehehe. I cannot wait to see what Sesshomaru will do next, especially after the little stunt Kagome pulled(taking off dress;black bikini). I wonder if he is going to join her in swimming? That's something to wonder about. Haha. Thank you for updating.

RubyJeweler xD


Saraniya (Chapter 7) - Sat 14 Apr 2012

Ooooh! Male hotness is always a great read :)


Saraniya (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

I loved Kagome's parting shot! It was awesome!!! I loved this chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next :)


Calypso (Chapter 6) - Sat 07 Apr 2012

I must say, I really love the way you work the locations into the story. And you brought Masataro back in with a new character!

I am seriously anticipating the next chapter. Sesshomaru IS going to fly there with her right? It should be fun <3

~Calpuff


RubyJeweler (Chapter 5) - Mon 14 Nov 2011

Sesshomaru is such a sweetie! ^^ Giving her a gigantic teddy bear is so cute! Hehe. Thank you, Smortz, for updating this story. <3


insomniac_amy (Chapter 5) - Sun 13 Nov 2011

I'm really enjoying reading this. I think it's so sweet how Sesshoumaru is traveling more for Kagome's enjoyment.

“A teddy bear!?” Kagome added, shaking her head. “God, I’ll never get that image out of my head!” <------ That line is sssooo funny!! I loved it!  I'm looking forward to the next update.


Sessygurl (Chapter 5) - Sun 13 Nov 2011

What an adorable chapter! I loved it! I cant wait for the next one! If you ever write a book, I would definately buy it. Your writing makes my day.


Alice (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

Shippo is hilarious!! :')


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

:convulses in laughter: Teddy bear? Really? :wipes eyes: oh gosh...

Thanks for writing!


fredisagirl (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

OMG this is one of the funniest things that I have read in a long time.  I wander what Shippo will do to Sheey. I can't wait.


KT (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

LOL She is my mother XD !!!   That was hillarious! Poor shippou! But it is great to see how much he still loves Kagome over the years. Sweet and funny! Thank you so much for updating another amazing chapter!


LadySafire (Chapter 4) - Fri 16 Sep 2011

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 SHIPPO!!! Oh someone is gonna get a verbal spanking!

ROFFFFFFFFFFFLMAOOOOOOOOOO!!


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